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JamesBlackWolfe
i'm a simple southern gentleman. Rev. 21:6 I am Alpha and Omega, the beginning and the end. I will give unto him that is athirst of the fountain of the water of life freely.
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Howdy, James here just a friendly reminder that as a writer i can not improve if i don't know what I've done right or wrong so please leave your comments or click the like or dislike icons. that being said i am writing chapter three at the moment will will hopefully have it posted by the end of the day. while this story isn't my only project this story takes precedence over the others.
Interesting start.
Why did they lose touch with Twilight?
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A few years after dash left she moved back to Canterlot. I'll explain more in later chapters pink well I haven't figured out how she passed and Rarity worked herself to death
I'm writing chapter five for those who are reading this story. I hope I am improving as I get into the swing of things. It has been a very long time since I have written for any but my self and making sure to minimize the mistakes is difficult. so please work with me and I hope you enjoy my tale
I reckon i got chapter five just about written. but i'm nary gonna post it if nobody is enjoying this story . i work hard on what i write and it's rather discouraging to see not many people seem to be enjoying my story. at 144 views I would expect more likes dislikes comments anything to tell me how i'm doing even if it's just to tell me I need work. So please if you read this like dislike comment it helps me as a writer.
This is an amazing start. Would you like a proofreader, commas are my jazz.
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Yes please I have such a problem with run on sentences and punctuation i just get to typing and forget the reader needs to breath lol. I'm glad you liked it i'm working on chapter eight right now
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Ok I'll pm you on monday. I'm on my phone right now, but I'll get to it asap
Right-o imma move my lazy flank and do chapter 3
Your grammar and writing skills seems to have improved a lot throughout this story. I've had to do almost nothing here
Thanks :-) it may have something to do with the fact the first few chapters were written while intoxicated.
I'll try and get chapter 8 finished tonight
I don't think I need to proofread these chapters...
well i greatly appreciate your help with this. it will be a few days before i begin work on chapter nine though i think it may just be the finial chapter maybe make it an even ten chapters I've sort of grown tired of this story. i'm glad you've been along for the ride even if you came in late
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It's been a pleasure working with you. Your writing skill and grammar have grown so good I need to do nothing for these last chapters. So farewell, my friend, and good luck.
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Thank you. Maybe I can call apon you in the future if I write more MLP stories.
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Please do