• Member Since 16th Feb, 2013
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bronydog


May all who come, leave as friends.

Comments ( 15 )

Turn is spelled with a U.

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And this is why comments exist. Thank you, I will now change it before I make an ass out of my self.

Comment posted by bronydog deleted Jul 16th, 2018

Lollipop didn't get a chance to finish as the lizardesk pony jumped on her, attempting the closest thing to a hug she could give.

lizard-esque.

You need an editor/proof-reader, otherwise this has been absolutely brilliant so far.

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grammarly is a grate program at times, this is not one of its times.

cuz you’re looking the best sweats maker in all of Uflana

Being really sweaty all the time could be a sign of heart problems... :trollestia:

8770484 Holding off on reading this yet (I am working on the last book of the Dresden Files right now, then I will catch up on fimfic), but as a writer I can recommend using LibreOffice and installing LanguageTool (both are free).

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Thanks for the tips, I'll definitely look in to those!

I just ate a honey bun, i don't know why but I wanted the world to know this.

changes you think should be made to a chapter?

Instead of 'prologue' it should be 'Prologue'.

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More then likely, i started this when i was younger, and now I'm very much embarrassed by the writing and some of the original locations I created. I'm not completely closing it in case I decide to do a rewrite at some point, but don't hold you breath.

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