• Member Since 20th Jun, 2014
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rantu1324


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You might wanna work on your words per chapter, they're way to short. Try aiming for 1500 - 2000

8616322
im not much of a writer and am just starting my stride.
also these are just intro chapters the main story pieces will be longer

I wonder how this crap got approved, because so far this got NOTHING to do with MLP.

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This is the intro part the main story is coming up also the first part withthe bookkeeper mentions unicorns minotaurs and griffins

"Vho vould dare!?"

"The Cabal dares!"

:pinkiesmile:

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