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Bendy

Bendy #1 · Dec 12th, 2017 · 1 · · New Jobs ·

The chapters are far too short.

Shenzy

Shenzy #2 · Dec 12th, 2017 · 1 · · New Jobs ·

1200 words for 5 chapters Oo
Most short flicks are 1200 for one.
Maybe throw them together to make it more consistent

Sherbert Music-Guard

Sherbert Music-Guard #3 · Dec 29th, 2017 · · · New Jobs ·

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thanks bendy and shenzy for your feedback.
I just don't really want to drag them so long that you don't want to read it.
but did you like it at least.
remember the saying "short and sweet" I just didnt want to make it really dragged out.

and also bendy.
I just cant believe you commented on my account.
i like your **coughs** special style **coughs** of fanfic, yours are some of the best written on fimfiction.