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Zedfire
When someone needs help, let me know, I, Zedfire, leader of the X Army, swear upon my life, I will help you, provided you're on the side of good.
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Ever heard of a "run-on paragraph"?
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To be honest, no.
good story but I believe that you need to start indenting your paragraphs.
I am not a grammer nazi but here is what Quite a few people think they look like camo.derpicdn.net/2e167e5f3c2d10f2aff730e481caac8f791320ee?url=http%3A%2F%2Fci.memecdn.com%2F7362186.jpg .
other than that great story
Better than I expected not that I expected it to be bad it’s just better than what I originally thought
Ps: completely urealated but my usual outfit is dressing just like Alex Mercer
Edit: MOAR
more?
8574463
That explains a lot
Say, I got a notice in my messages saying this story was updated but I don't see a new chapter, so what happened?
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I think there was an up date to the grammer portion or an accidental update on an un finnished chapter
*pukes out rainbows* (that was how awesome it was that it made me puke out rainbows out of my mouth +1 like)
um i love the prototype games so in turn this is god like
My only question is how does luna survie this ?