Twilight's long time friend Lux moves to Ponyville from Canterlot. Even though he is shy and uncomfortable talking to other ponies, Twilight and her friends try and help him to overcome is timid nature. slowly he eyes another pony from afar wishing he could be with her, but every pony has secrets. Will he risk revealing his secrets to find love, or will he carry on with his life the same way he has for years.
This is a remastered version of my first fanfic, so any of my previous readers, please refrain from announcing spoilers, and thanks to BDbrony for helping me edit
Chapters (1)
Reading now.
EDIT: Allright. Has potential, eventhough Lux seems a bit odd, since his behaviour changes by about 180° all the time. I realize it is because he feels comfy around Twilight, but it seems a bit excessive. Otherwise some errors and his stuttering could be expressed differently, it gets a bit boring to read after a while.
I'm gonna favourite this and see how it continues, so don't let me get you down, it definitely is a good story!
937321 I promise not to let you down
Added story to my favorites, hope to see more chapter soon! :D
P.S. Story see,s to be very similar to "Nocturne" where Dust (Grey coated mare) has a similar problem, very shy ect...
Give that a read to make sure your story doesn't end up just being the same except different characters. :)
937628 impossible, Lux is my oc, and this is the remastered version of my first story that i did back in march