Everyone needs a little chaos

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Foal Star #1 · Nov 14th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Awww this was adorable. I would say this is really good for a first fic well done!

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doomie-22 #2 · Nov 14th, 2017 · 1 · ·

He could torture angel bunny, the rabbit deserved it for peeing on his pillow.

I could see Angel Bunny doing that.

“Yes, go hide and piss on something else.” Discord groaned.

This sounds like something Discord would say.

and apple farming friend; no thank you.”

Applejack is so unimportant to Discord that he can't even be bothered to remember her name.

“Rarity are you sure about this?” Fluttershy meekly asked a crinkly diaper wrapped around her waist.
“You wanted a onesie and I cant weel make it fit if you aren’t wearing the proper attire.” Fluttershy merely blushed and waddled over to Rarity.

Ah, Fluttershy in a diaper. How cute. It's also nice that Rarity knows about this side of her and is completely okay with it.

“Please darling, Shutterfly? You could have used a bit more creativity.”

I believe there's a company with that name. It's also referenced in "Princess Twilight Sparkle, Part 1."

“Must they always be this noisy?”
“Of course silly. Its so mommy know where their little one is at all times.”

Ah, come on, Discord, crinkles are one of the best things about diapers.

Overall, this was pretty good, grammar and punctuation issues aside. (I suggest you get a proofreader/editor.) I normally don't much care for Discord, but I'm interested in seeing where this goes. I'd like to see Discord acting like a Daddy to Fluttershy by way of diapering and babying her.

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