The Perfect Rainbow
written by Midnight Phoenix
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Great story mate
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Thanks!
This is gonna be good
I like it,
This is getting better and better, romantic drama all around, yeah I like that. 
Awesome job my friend.keep up the great work.
I have a distinct feeling that lying will come back to bite him in the ass
Will this story have any M/F sex scenes, implied or otherwise where the woman does most or all of the work?
8592569
Sorry, I forgot to change the status to complete. No second chapter.
At least Dash is even with him now.
Ill be honest about this.
The pacing's bad.
It escalates too quickly — things don't just go from kissing a guy she just met to a full on 'job that quickly. It seems forced for the sake of plot.
8602546
Yea, I know it was rushed. Tbh Ive been writing this story over the course of two months. Everytime I came back to it, I lost track and I honestly couldnt think of anyway to space the story out anymore. I just wanted to get this over with so I could work a different story already.
She just sucked me off then dipped