Four words and they are all true. SBPS follows the girls of Canterlot High after the events of Legend of Everfree, as they deal with graduation, maturation, and a parasite that just wants to cuddle their gray matter.
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Pertaining to the author's note there: Nah, I'm liking this so far, there's no real need to change the formula you have now. In any case, just keep doing it however you feel comfortable!
I have a suspicion that another side-effect of the parasite is creating some kind of bio-magic generator inside a human body. Meaning RD now don't need magic from the outside source in most normal case.
As for your question, I don't mind having chopped-up chapters like we are having now. I think your current system does suite your style (that's the feeling I got from reading your other stories too). Heck, in every TV programs I watched, there were always a commercial break no matter how big or small the scenes are. So I think there is not much need to create a super big chapter just to contain the whole big scene.
Ask Cadance: How do you feel about your transformation at the concert? Did you take a selfie to show your boyfriend later?
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8939525 Thanks for the feedback. I've taken to naming chapters based around the scenes happening within them, too, which should help alleviate the "is this a scene break or just a pause?" problem.
We think the current methodology of chapters is working fine, nothing confusing about the breaks.
It occurs that Twilight totally forgot useful magic study equipment. But relocation is possible so triage will do.
To Bridgette: don't you trust Fluttershy?
Keep going_ ;)
I'm totally okay with bigger drops
Also of course twilight dismisses the brain answer! THE BRAIN IS THE MOST IMPORTANT SEX ORGAN THERE IS GIRL!
Also wondering if dash will still get that crippling g fear response from the parasite like she did with rarity.
Oh, I got distracted in my last comment. I also wanted to say friggin PinkieBacon are adorable as hell
To Twilight Velvet: Do you have that babble-inducing effect on most people, or just ones who interrupt your reading?
(Also, loving this story. Fascinating world building, strong characterization, and a good, hard look at post-high school life for the girls amidst all the M-rated stuff.)
8941375 Ah, there is a key difference this time than last time she encountered a "sleeping beauty."
8941376 It is a good ship!
8941457 Thanks!
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If that happen, it will be a big give-away hint to where the 'disease' source is.
No offense to human twilight but after sunset the one with the most magical knowledge is princess twilight. You are very creative but you don't know a ton about magic compared to sunset you are still a rookie but give it time maybe the princess could lend you some books on magic and I don't think sunset would mind teaching a thing or two if you want.