Beautiful, my good man. Excellent job.

nice!

I kinda wanna see his bitching friends from the first chapter again. But now bitching about how he got into a herd with those too so quickly.

Oh, and beautifully written smut, BTW.

Yay, second chapter-- and already impressing with the details and different personalities and how things work!

grabbing hos dick

*his

we gotta do this myway.”

Space between 'my' and 'way'

Don't stop 'til you get into the "1000 likes and growing" group! You can do it!

This is so well done i am in love with this Fanfic congrats like full serous and stuff

Holy shit! I swear if you stop writing this story, I will.... do nothing to you because I don't even know where you live/who you are. However, I'll be mad. So there

*opens fimfic* "Dammit, why is that story still on the featured box, didn't it fall off alre-oooooooh.

Dude! My main man, Titus! Getting some! Nice work dude, you got yourself a handful.

Seriously though, damm. Wasn't expecting that to happen. Still, really interesting read. You've enraptured me. Feel free to keep doing so.

Seriously, DAT ASS!

Holy hell, that Coldheart scene was fucking hot.

think they two

the

we’re known for making some out of this world sweets

This phrase doesn't make sense.

dragged human

Missing the

grabbing hos dic

his

him are hard

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to lift raise herself

Delete one of this

TMW I see an update for this story and I didn't think there'd be another.
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Great chapter can't wait for More

I'm really enjoying how these three interact with each other. I kinda wanted to see how Titus's stallion friends react to his situation. More just for all the new potential bitching they could talk about.

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we’re known for making some out of this world sweets

This phrase doesn't make sense.

Bon Bon, Pinkie, AJ, all earth ponies, all make sweet things.

we asked and we got MORE!

Thx so much Little Big Pone

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Ah! Ok
I was not parsing it properly
"out of this world" is a modifier for "sweets" and grouped together.

Just underneath the doctor’s stoic, resolute expression Titus could sense something. He saw it in the slight movements of the earth pony’s body, the way that she leaned forward toward him to take deep breaths, even in the way that her tail not too discreetly dragged against his ass. It was hunger; pure, animalistic hunger.

It was hunger; pure, animalistic hunger.

Goddamn I am in love with this shit~

Good lawdy this is the start of something glorious~ Good show!
Good show! I hope to see more fics like this, hehehe

This was absolutely, excellent. I loved how cute all the ponies are. I also enjoyed the reversed gender roles.

Its still marked incomplete!!?!? OH GOD!!! PLEASE YES!!!

And this was a nice chapter too.

Next time pregnant mares and tiny fools?^^

“—and I don’t mean to brag, but my flank isn’t too shabby wither

either

Titus couldn’t hold it back any longer. Throwing back his head, he started laughing hard. The young man was laughing so hard that he had to let go of both mare’s hooves so he could hug his stomach.

I don't blame the guy. This whole 'reverse gender roles' schick is bucking hilarious! Coldheart is outstanding. Not to mention absolutely adorable.

Author's Note:
Contains Tendering, loving sex, rough, aggressive sex, thirsty mares, and silly horses antics
I think I have one more chapter in me, fellas. Hope you like this one.

I think we can expect this-
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Titus buried his face into the mare’s neck, inhaling her scent. Panting hard, he lifted her up and angled over his throbbing cock. She squirmed excitedly, reaching down and grabbing hos dick as he lowered her.

his

Now this, this is an example of how a supposed One-shot story, can be the groundwork for a good series.

I salute the author

Really nice update!

Does anyone know why this fic got added to the "hypnosis and mind control" group? It doesn't appear to have any of that...

I'm enjoying this little bit of RGRE. Lovely stuff.

Here's a drinking game: take a shot every time they say "buck."
Re-read if not brickfaced.

That was fun! Coldheart's false bravado is just adorable. Or well, maybe not false, but it's pretty amusing how quickly it can fall apart, as beautifully depicted when Titus started to laugh. Poor thing must have been mortified then.
The both of them didn't realize one simple fact - his mentality is completely different than the mares and stallions of Equestria, and that results in a lot of amusement.

Also, Redheart was quite over-protective when the three of them went to her place. Yet another amusing thing for Titus.
She's also pretty firm in her beliefs that she's going to love him - now that's dedication... and betting all you have on one outcome. Well, it's working so far.

So there's still at least one more chapter of this? Awesome, looking forward to even more!

Das is good!!! Very good!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Really liked all the mushy stuff and dat clop, unf x10

>Cute Nurse Sweetheart not in the HiE harem
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Still, I quite enjoyed this story and the clop was especially very hot. ^^

I really like the more animalistic traits and actions like running off other mares or when CH and RH face off for first dibs.

Please let Nurse red heart has foals, please-please please. Have him give her more foals after those foals are born

Done oral. Now virginal. Next has to be anal to match the set!

Hot damn this chapter. Not going to lie I want you to pump out, heh, as many chapters as you feel able to but PLEASE makenit more than one more. I need more of this lewdness in my life!

Is this going to be a full story, or a short one?

Last one needs to be the BREEDING
Or even better, the breeding while the first triplets are sleeping in the next room

Such nurse, much medical care.
happy patient~

Nicely done. Hottest part was Coldhearts dirty talk for me. Id really like to seem them ride him at the same time.

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I could only ask for one more chapter with a little foal fluff.

So aside from typos that irked me, which, I mean, what're you gonna do, and the penchant for characters to say "buck" a lot, this was pretty... good.

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You mean while the triplets are watching.

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Surprisingly so, yeah. A few people (including me) who take this shit way too seriously did some calculations. They were rough, I admit, but the show doesn't give us much to work with in our defense. Most people came to the conclusion that MLP ponies would probably have an average penis size which is an inch or two longer than the average human's (≈7-8 inches), but far thinner. Horse dicks aren't big because they're horse dicks, they're big because horses are big.

Which, yeah, that would make the equipment pretty useless. As someone who is way stockier than most people, I can tell you that being thick but short is enough to make most things not fit. Clothing in my case, but I digress. Getting a tube that would fit Titus' girth would almost certainly mean that it would be far too long, which would throw off the whole machine.

Also, these ponies are even smaller than most portray them as. It was mentioned that the ponies in this story only come up to Titus' knees, which would make the average pony's dick even smaller.

Also, it's LBP's story, and he can do what he wants.

Yes, I just wrote three paragraphs about the penis size of an imaginary race. No, I am not weird, I swear.

Also also, being awkward has no relation to your penis size.

"Why you laugh at us, human?!"

"'Cause I never realized how corny this was until I was the one getting hit on!"

Can't wait for the next chapter

I find the Redheart's and Cold heart's displace of protecting their stallion and even the small bit on who goes first adorable. More please!!!