In your shocked state, it takes a moment for you to realize that Windy is currently sucking on your balls even as you continue to rut her.
Sweet ass this mare is flexible I do like this, I like this a looot.
Whew, nothing like some surprise anal and a lot of ego-boosting words from a super hot milf to fill you with confidence, lawd above this was fucking delicious. And that end with all of the mares staring, unf, unf I say! Ahhh... this is one of those things that if I had the muns, I'd commission someone to turn it into a delicious comic, there're some fics I'd love to see some visuals for and this is one of them.
Unf, I can only wonder what's next. A part of me is sort of hoping to see something with both Windy and that one mare... was it Freefall? The one who threw You/Me some candy at the yoga class? Either way.
This was fantastic! Great idea with the Shadowbolts show, they don't get enough love (although I may want to reconsider that considering the type of show they put on ).
The intermission scene was also really well done, and I cracked up at the ponies who knew what was up on the way to the bathroom, as well as the voyers staring on the way out.
In all, this chapter was well worth the build up, this is definitely one of your best works. Cheers!
So what exactly is the age of consent in your Equestria Madmax? And I'm not asking this to be confrontational, but all these ponies seem unusually cool with potential foalcon.
Also, I think that the main character's mom knew that Windy was looking for love and, being worried about her son's lack of friends, romantic interest, or confidence, sent him to Windy because she predicted that this would happen and wanted to push her son's development along. Unlikely, but adds a little bit of extra spice to the story.
Why do I suddenly like the shadowbolts now? nah they were always awesome
As always, shaping up to be excellent. I also really like the worldbuilding and the pegasi dying their feathers to look more attractive.
Funnily enough, irl if a bird breaks a primary or secondary feather off high enough on the shaft, you can attach an old moulted feather to fix it, it's called imping. I wondered if that could play a part in pegasus culture, like maybe intentionally imping in a lover's feather (both a public display of affection and a show of supreme trust, letting them help keep you flying), or having lots of different ponies feathers imped in as a mark of shame (I am so clumsy I've broken all of my feathers, it says) and they'd moult out in a year or so, ending the shame.
Many delicious scents hit your nose, each one as mouth watering as the last. Popcorn, pegasi wings sprinkled with brown sugar, cloud candy, deep fried hayfries, hayburgers, nachos, and many other aromas you can’t place but make your stomach gurgle all the same.
So we're just going to ignore the fact that they're eating pegasi wings? smh
Those mares who were blushing at the end... Champ may have just gotten a few admirers of his own. Imagine how awkward it would be if one of them knew Windy, and suddenly showed at Windy’s place looking for the handsome young stud she rushed into the bathroom that one day.
Fantastic stuff Max! I could really feel the passion and desire building up between the colt and Windy!
The Shadowbolts show was incredible too! I imagine there would have been many other spectators with 'needs' that would have to be taken care of! I'm surprised the facility doesn't have a special area just for that!
Raises hoofs in prayer: Don't leave Windy with foal, Don't leave Windy with foal, Don't leave Windy with foal, Please don't leave Windy with foal, Champ.
I do wonder what Windy and "Champ" will get up to on the journey back to her house. If Windy is flying home carrying Champ, she will feel his excitement and once they are home invite him in to her bed for the rest of the night. If they are being flown home by carriage, Windy could tease him without the flyer noticing.
The Krusty Kloud pizza is the pizza for you and me!
So, Windy Whistles brought you here to find other ponies. Instead, you go at it like animals....
Noice!
So... Max...
Sequel with cousin Vinyl when?
Sweet ass this mare is flexible I do like this, I like this a looot.
Whew, nothing like some surprise anal and a lot of ego-boosting words from a super hot milf to fill you with confidence, lawd above this was fucking delicious. And that end with all of the mares staring, unf, unf I say! Ahhh... this is one of those things that if I had the muns, I'd commission someone to turn it into a delicious comic, there're some fics I'd love to see some visuals for and this is one of them.
Unf, I can only wonder what's next.
A part of me is sort of hoping to see something with both Windy and that one mare... was it Freefall? The one who threw You/Me some candy at the yoga class? Either way.
Good show!
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Agreed. Very Noice.
Surprise Buttsex!!!
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Starting out with anal? That seems familiar....
(Joking, I don't really mind.)
There is no wrong hole.
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DAMMIT!! YOU BEAT ME TO IT!!
This was fantastic! Great idea with the Shadowbolts show, they don't get enough love (although I may want to reconsider that considering the type of show they put on ).
The intermission scene was also really well done, and I cracked up at the ponies who knew what was up on the way to the bathroom, as well as the voyers staring on the way out.
In all, this chapter was well worth the build up, this is definitely one of your best works. Cheers!
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Yet one more reason why Equestria is greater than any nation on this planet.
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Ohoho noooo! Patented Skinner pizza! Ooooold family recipie!
So much YES with this chapter! Woo!
Nice play in the Pegasi Wings snack. As a Canadian who eats Beaver Tails I appreciate it.
This hit all the right stuff.
So what exactly is the age of consent in your Equestria Madmax? And I'm not asking this to be confrontational, but all these ponies seem unusually cool with potential foalcon.
Also, I think that the main character's mom knew that Windy was looking for love and, being worried about her son's lack of friends, romantic interest, or confidence, sent him to Windy because she predicted that this would happen and wanted to push her son's development along. Unlikely, but adds a little bit of extra spice to the story.
You work fast...
Why do I suddenly like the shadowbolts now?
nah they were always awesome
As always, shaping up to be excellent. I also really like the worldbuilding and the pegasi dying their feathers to look more attractive.
Funnily enough, irl if a bird breaks a primary or secondary feather off high enough on the shaft, you can attach an old moulted feather to fix it, it's called imping.
I wondered if that could play a part in pegasus culture, like maybe intentionally imping in a lover's feather (both a public display of affection and a show of supreme trust, letting them help keep you flying), or having lots of different ponies feathers imped in as a mark of shame (I am so clumsy I've broken all of my feathers, it says) and they'd moult out in a year or so, ending the shame.
So we're just going to ignore the fact that they're eating pegasi wings? smh
Aw yis.
Already pumped for the next chapter.
Those mares who were blushing at the end... Champ may have just gotten a few admirers of his own. Imagine how awkward it would be if one of them knew Windy, and suddenly showed at Windy’s place looking for the handsome young stud she rushed into the bathroom that one day.
Noooooo a colt stole my WIAFU ahhhhhh jk
But seriously when is the next chapter
Fantastic stuff Max! I could really feel the passion and desire building up between the colt and Windy!
The Shadowbolts show was incredible too! I imagine there would have been many other spectators with 'needs' that would have to be taken care of! I'm surprised the facility doesn't have a special area just for that!
Love it, can't wait for next chapter!
When is the next chapter coming? Come on man, don't leave is in suspense!
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Sorry, was spending the weekend with my mother. You know, cause of Mother's Day.
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Gotcha, same here. Hope y'all had a good time!
Raises hoofs in prayer: Don't leave Windy with foal, Don't leave Windy with foal, Don't leave Windy with foal, Please don't leave Windy with foal, Champ.
I do wonder what Windy and "Champ" will get up to on the journey back to her house. If Windy is flying home carrying Champ, she will feel his excitement and once they are home invite him in to her bed for the rest of the night. If they are being flown home by carriage, Windy could tease him without the flyer noticing.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
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The song in the stadium matches this.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=8j2Ag41KgdY
The Krusty Kloud...goddamnit
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To true
Krusty Kloud Pizza is the pizza for you and... MEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
Wut