Dammit Max, now I want chocolate-banana crepes.... Also, IDK if you were *trying* to make a statement on sex ed here, but I'm glad you put all that in.
Or that batponies are incestual and lewd in nature, although…” she hums thoughtfully, “that one mightactuallyhave a grain of truth to it… but that’s besides the point.”
Ah yeah i think i remember reading something like that a while ago ;D
What I love most about these stories isn't the sex (although that is top notch) but rather these chapters here. It could be Windy making breakfast or Velvet's story where she takes him shopping and having the Best Princess talk. Either way I love it and it keeps me checking my feed when I wake up or before I got to bed looking for a new chapter.
8928737 Not really. Just trying to add some lore to the universe.
8928918 Yeah, the story chapters are always more fun to write than the clops ones, but that's just because I enjoy adding lore and background to this universe.
8929879 What can I say? I'm a food-orientated type of person.
Shamer no shaming.
Rainbow Factory reference. A classic
Found a quick typo:
Another great chapter, some more pegasi world-building, a Rainbow Factory reference , and mention of some incestuous thestrals ?
I get it!
And deep in the throne room of Canterlot castle, Celestia wonders if she may have turned on too much sun.
Dammit Max, now I want chocolate-banana crepes....
Also, IDK if you were *trying* to make a statement on sex ed here, but I'm glad you put all that in.
Ah yeah i think i remember reading something like that a while ago ;D
I ain't the only one who's thinking what everyone else is thinking.
Also holy ass Bow, calm yo man tiddies.
Nice chapter well done! I'm liking what you got going for the Pegasi so far, it's interesting, and neat
Keep it up man!
Another great chapter, keep it up.
What I love most about these stories isn't the sex (although that is top notch) but rather these chapters here. It could be Windy making breakfast or Velvet's story where she takes him shopping and having the Best Princess talk. Either way I love it and it keeps me checking my feed when I wake up or before I got to bed looking for a new chapter.
This is apparently a reference to something. Could someone tell me what it's a reference to?
Suddenly this chapter got all politically correct.
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it's a reference to another one of Max's stories "Chris's Batty Family" I believe. Or it could be another story on this site.
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Ah. Thanks.
Well geez, so Cloudsdale is pretty much a modern Sodom and Gomorrah
There is so much food porn here!
Please, continue
If we don’t fuck freefall I’ll be disappoint.
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Sorry, was rereading comments and happened to see yours. If I had to give the age of consent, I'd say it's around 16ish.
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Yeah, except, you know... it's not.
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Thanks for the find.
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Not really. Just trying to add some lore to the universe.
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Yeah, the story chapters are always more fun to write than the clops ones, but that's just because I enjoy adding lore and background to this universe.
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What can I say? I'm a food-orientated type of person.
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As I look back on the comment, it did seem a little out of taste and over exaggerated so I apologize for that.
I mean, at least they don’t have beds lining up the streets with Pegasi going at it. That’s definitely S and G.
But seriously, keep up the good work my good man
"Pineapple." Why you gotta hurt me like this?
Uuuuuuuuh.....
The sex lore building was very interesting.....
Inspiration is flooding my brain brb imma write a cringey fan sequel.
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I just turned 16.
😼
Not all batponies! But the noticed ones.... Sure....