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TehSpy


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"OKAY! Pinkie! God, what do you want?"

Shouldn't that be Goddess?:trollestia:

But, little did they know, Twilight wasn't worried about the law, Twilight was concerned whether or not Dash was using Scootaloo.

Twilight thinks Rainbow Dash is a foalaphile?:pinkiegasp:

I think you may have a problem of "you told me the story through the description already". It reads more like a plot synopsis

Just as good as the first chapter

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I mean, she is, if we’re to take the actual meaning of the word. Now whether or both she’s a poulocriminal is yet another worry.

I’m loving this so far, although there is a lot that still needs to be worked on. Nonetheless, I would like advise against stopping here: it has a lot of potential!

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