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ChildrenOfTheSun


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Snowy is just a pony, broken down by a vile and mean world. Waking up every single morning with a grimace and pulling herself up to get doing what she must. And while she covers it all in deep philosophy and ideology, it doesn't make her pain subside.

She works at a movie theater in Manehatten. Totted as the best service due to her nature of "always being in the dark" and "having perfect, batty eyes". Even though this is most definitely not what she wishes she had to do. She goes on. After all, she'll never be an actual writer, right?

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 8 )

Eerily similar to my life... seriously, are you stalking me? Also, keep up the good work, though you did have some rather flowery sentences and more than a few padded ones, it was still a well written chapter, I must admit that I look forward to reading your next chapters.

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Oh! Thanks for the encouragement! I was really afraid to set my stuff out here, but I'm glad someone enjoyed it! I've only started writing in a fully way real recently, and I can only hope people enjoy it. Also, sorry if some of it seems out of place or strange... It's my first writing, but I am a poet and role player, longer novel-like writing is not my field. But here I am none-the-less!

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As someone suffers through his own bit of anxiety when it comes to writing stuff for this site, I keep this in mind. Write something that you're proud of, or something that you want to post just for fun, and see what happens. If things don't work out, then learn from the experience. A good bit of writing is a bit of trial and error, but when you do find that thing that works, it is very rewarding and keep practicing. After all, practice doesn't make perfect. Practice makes PERMENANT!

Believe me when I say that I probably never would have realized me love for writing if I had let my anxiety hold me back.

This is some very good work snowy. You just keep doing you and never stop.

Nice story lad! Keep it goin!

Hello! I was just passing by, scanning new story titles when I come across this. The only reason it caught my attention was because of the title.

You must like the same titled song from the self-titled album of a great band :raritywink:

i like your descriptors and detail, but the swearing really puts me off, you know? But hey, if it's your style, I'm all for it. Just keep writing and you'll be great in no time :twilightsmile:

Onwards and upwards!

Is it a coincidence that my OC's name is Snowy and has a quill in their cutie mark?

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Maybe a bit. But I never really think up any cutie marks, I just sort of suck with them.

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