Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. There will likely be spoilers in the comments, so please be careful if you want to have the content come as a surprise.

Suggestions for future chapters are welcome.

Pipsqueak gulped one more time, and studied the cards again. Ace, ten, four. Two more cards to deal, but there was no turning back after he agreed

“... you have no idea how all-in you are,” Diamond boasted, slamming down her cards. Two tens.

“... blimey.” Pip sighed, revealing an ace and a Noble.

Out came a two.

Ace.

I hate to be that guy here, but... with a board of Ace-Ace-Ten-Four-Two, Ten-Ten still beats Ace-(translated Jack). The second Ace improves Diamond's hand to a full house. Maybe make the Noble into a Four or something, so that Pip has a better full house?

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... very good point. Your "That guy"-ness is highly appreciated.

I thought it was great! Can't wait for another.

just how far is daimond willing to stake?

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Who knows?

Oh wait, I do.

Will this ever continue?

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Truth be told: My muse is a fickle mistress. I meant it when I said:

Updates will be highly irregular, if at all present. I'll do my best.

I won't say it's not gonna happen and I, in fact, have some drafts of a potential second chapter laying about. That said, I have no idea if it's going to pan out or not.

Part of it is my life being pretty busy, part of it is lack of inspiration, and part of it is that I feel just plain weird writing about Little Ponies fucking.

I don't advise getting your hopes up, but you never know.

Still hoping this will continue. lol

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Flattered as I am, it's very unlikely. I ended up scrapping that second chapter for a few reasons, and I don't see myself returning to this, sorry.

(You wear your name well. )

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Do you have some details regarding chapter 2?

Also if you have no plans to continue this story, could you mark it as cancelled?

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