Applejack is enjoying her life on Sweet Apple Acres, when an old school bully comes back to town. The last time Applejack and him were face to face, he did something horrible to her. And she has never forgiven him. Nor has anypony else who remembers how much of a bully he was. His only chance for redemption is given to him by the youngest Apple Family member when she discovers a secret of his that he had hidden for a long time. Will Applebloom be able to help this stallion fix the damage he had done when he was a young colt, or will he never get the chance to tell Applejack how he truly feels?
A/N: Wow, I guess it takes the awsomeness that is MLP: FIM for me to return to writing fan fiction. I haven't written fanfiction since 2008, so forgive me if this is kinda crude or rushed. I'm kinda rusty doing this thing. Hope ya'll enjoy it as much as I did writing it.
I'm not too sure what to say about this chapter, however Ill track and thumbs up to see where this will go.
*Finishes reading the ending*
DUN DUN DUN!!!
Joking of course, I liked this, I think I'll keep an eye on it for sure!
Pretty good! I like the first chapter so far! A few things could've been a bit better in here but overall, a great start! 4/5!
I would like this more if not for pony creator images...
dis gon be gud
seems like a legit story *fav*
make MOAR!
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Really? What's wrong with having the pictures? Not to start an arguement or anything. Just want your opinion.
898491 I think he meant the picture in the story is fine, not the General Zao's Pony Creator
will follow to see how it goes
Update soon, please!
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Don't worry, everypony! Tomorrow I will start work on Chapter 2.
Do you have an editor?
Just wondering, 'cause you said it was rushed, and I wasn't sure if you were looking for one . . .
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Well, I was just saying it had been a long time since I wrote a fanfic, around 2008. I'm just rusty writing, that's all. But if you would like to edit my work, I would be more than happy to welcome the extra help.
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Oh ok. Well, I just wanted to show how Trotter looked like when he was a colt and what he looks like now. Don't worry though, this will most likely be the only chapter to have pictures in it, seeing as I can not draw if my life depended on it.
Lastly, the second chapter is almost done. Would've been done sooner, but I had to work this weekend. You know how it goes. Anyway, I should be able to finish the second chapter and upload it either today or tomorrow.
awww
Can you change paragraphs whenever a new person speaks?
MOAR
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Sure, problem fixed.
Wow! The way you write the story is amazing! I love this! 5/5!
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I'm very glad you enjoyed this chapter much better. Could you let me know what you felt made this chapter better than the previous one?
Well, back in the first chapter, there were a few things that I didn't really agree with much in some lines, but I still like the first chapter overall with 4/5. But this chapter was perfect to me! It was very well written out, and definitely what I would have the characters do in this chapter! Which comes out with 5/5!
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Including the Pinkie Pie part? Because I was really nervous writing that scene, I didn't know if people were going to like it or not.
In my opinion, that Pinkie Pie scene was pretty funny! It reminded me of Pinkie Pie breaking the 4th wall multiple times. Oh, Pinkie. You so crazy.
It's still a really good chapter though. I'm definitely keeping this story as a favorite. 
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Ok, last question, how do you feel about Trotter? I'm just worried that he may have seemed a little too Mary-Sue (or is it Gary-Sue), what with all the adventures he's had, as well as boasting about them. Sorry for all the questions, like I've said before, it's been a while since I've written fanfiction.
That part is actually well written out. Though, I do have to question the part where he kicks a fully grown dragon so ahrd, a tooth flies out. I can fully understand that ponies have a real strong kick. But... a 3 foot pony gaining a victory over... a fully grown gigantic dragon... something to question. But since it was still good overall, I decided to let the pass, and just read the rest of this magnificent chapter! You say it's been awhile since you've written fanfiction. I say, you still got it.
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I never said he kicked the tooth out..
And yeah, I was still in high school (2008) when I was working on my last fan fic. This is actually my first fic using an OC, all the fanfics I wrote back then were crossovers, mostly with Kingdom Hearts.
Oh and thanks, I think I've gotten better with age.
Well, today, I start work on Chapter 3. Don't know when I'll be finished with it, but hopefully soon.
can't wait for the next chapter
Trotter is an utter badass! fought a dragon and had proof of it!
, i feel bad for him, what ever he did has to be really bad, if not they need to learn to live and forget!
ohhhhh!! wanna read more
MAKE MOAR!!!!
Update! :D?
Umm? Is it gonna be finished?