Stormy is a normal student at Canterlot High. She has a normal family. She did normal things. But she didn't have a normal pet. And today, said pet decided to follow her to school. Watch out for the cuteness.
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HNNNNNNNGGGGG!!!
......moar bat pone!!
Very cute. Needs some work in places to make it sound better, but I could care less from the cootness of it.
I wanna pet bat pony too!
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Shadow: Thank you guys for your comments. Really, I wasn't so sure if it was good, as this is my first one-shot that I wrote thanks to an roleplay with a friend on Twitter. Took me a long time to remove the nonsense of the roleplay I had, and I altered a lot of things. Anyways, thanks again, and who knows? I might consider making a sequel to this someday...
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It's a good start. A sequel may be fun.
It's adorable! I would love to tickle a pony all day, especially a bat pony!!!!!!!
Question: If the tickle machine was made for Blaze, why was it shaped like human feet for Fluttershy to test?
Not that I'm complaining though, it would be fun to tickle Fluttershy's feet too!
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Yes!!! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!
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Shadow: Haha, I'll get the one who built the machine to answer for you:
Stormy: I made the machine adaptable, Blaze sometimes like to tickle me too, and if I don't let her, she get's a pouty face that can make you die from cuteness... Seriously, one of my neighbors almost had a heart attack when he saw her pouting.