• Published 24th May 2017
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Fire In Her Body - Game-BeatX14



After a strenuous training session on a bitter cold day, Soarin starts to wonder how Spitfire is staying so warm with seemingly no effort at all. Spitfire decides to teach him that the ‘fire’ in her name isn’t for nothing.

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Wow, this was beautifully presented!

8186468 Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :pinkiehappy:

Interesting idea... might have to do a follow up with multiple Wonderbolts ;)

8186484 That's a neat suggestion; I never really though about how it would work out with other ponies. Can't say a follow up is likely at the moment, but it's always a possibility if I feel like revisiting the idea later. :twilightsmile:

Spitfire is The Marendarin.
Sweet headcannon.
Thank you for this.

8186506 I had to Google "Marendarin" and it came up with tons of pages in another language, and an image search gives me Mandarin oranges. :rainbowhuh:

So I'm not sure what that is, but thank you. :pinkiehappy:

8186514 Its a pun, the origin is The Mandarin from Iron Man 3. He can super heat his own body, breath fire, and other such awesomeness.

8186520 Oh yeah, I remember him now. That makes more sense. :twilightsmile:

This was nice, cute and different. I considered something like this with spike climaxing with fire. After all dragons are incindiary creatures so it makes sense.

8187520 That's actually a sweet idea; I would totally read something like that. :moustache:

I've got a fever.......and the only prescrption is more Soarinfire!
Man I've been wanting to see this from you for a looooooooooooooong time, glad you did it. Was expecting some cheesy teasing before the main event but whatever.:rainbowlaugh: Well played my flend.

8190165 Thank you. Soarinfire was pretty fun to write about. :twilightsmile:

Might want to consider a dubcon tag in the description; at pretty much every stage, Soarin expresses reluctance or hesitance, even saying that he's uncomfortable with what's happening, and Spitfire's response is to deride him, ignore him, or even make what could be seen as thinly veiled threats about what she could do to him. It adds an angle I don't think you had in mind for the story.

Comment posted by Game-BeatX14 deleted Jun 5th, 2017
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