So I woke up this morning to find out I'm some Lovecraftian Eldritch Horror, Elder God thing. That however is not the issue. The problem is being said Eldritch Horror in a bright colorful land of magic and talking ponies.
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Chapter 5 is up!
Reminds of the tactical nuke in COD MW2
Yeah yeah, all but the last ten or so lines are dreary BUT needed dialog but the last number of lines brought back the fun!
Waiting for MOAR! When ever you get it out!
Eldritch didn't answer the invitation!!! How rude
Beginning of this paragraph should not have a quotation mark.
just take it all of my love
seriously house, your everything but pinky proof? come on!
8192852 TO be fair, can anything be Pinkie-proof?
8192888 fair enough the the abyss watchers theme makes sad things sadder
8192852 i don't think anything is Pinkie proof.
8192893 The Illogic.
Limit Break Available: Housecleaning Party.
I really hope Eldritch has read Pinkie Vs Cthuluu, binkie Pie and others similar, just to get a small idea of her Full 4th Wall destructive capacity.
Basically, if its been written down, Pinkie can step outside of it and rewrite it.
Everything has been written down somewhere at some time.
I highly suspect Eldritch is too young to even remember MIDI Trackers and MOD files and the alien home computer that started it all off. Especially the very first Monolith launch unit. Lorraine.
Wonder if Eldritch likes Reboot.
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8193183 classic yet gold.
8192827 Thanks for catching that.
8192760 Thank you for the idea, I added a little something just for you.
8192893 No, nothing can be Pinkie-proof.
8192899 You did call it. Here have a moustache
8193143 I didn't catch that, thanks
8193188 Indeed it is.
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Why is it that I catch more mistakes when I reread the chapter in normal mode more than reading it in edit mode?
8193246 It's because I assume, in edit mode, there are marks for some mistakes. Along with that, you actively look for mistakes, and you may be skipping over bits or going too quickly to catch the mistakes. Reading it casually means that you want to simply read it, and you may notice more errs since you go over all of it at a more sedate pace.
8193252 Thank you for explaining that That's very helpful.
Whatever the hell this drug is, I ask for more. Consequences be damned.
8193384 You'll get more, I'm hoping I have energy enough for the next chapter tomorrow
I was kinda with this at first, but despite the outlandish premise, it already feels like it's going through the motions in the worst way. Jokes are getting stale, main character isn't very funny or interesting, and the rest is all by-the-numbers.
Jesus Christ its Eldritch Horror!!!
(Main 6 saw Fluffle Puff video...)
WHAT WAS THAT?! Why were ME and CHYSALIS in the same house like a roommate?!
Looks pretty convincing to me.
Goodness, I was not in that damaging video.
Now, mah opinion on the bug queen has slightly changed.
That fluffy pony is really cute. Oh, I wish I could meet her.
I need to prepare a Welcome Party for the queen buggie and her pet!
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8193513 That is quite brilliant my friend
8193466 Next Chapter: The Great Dubstep War! Vinyl vs. Eldritch!
"Time to end this...."
8193452 I can see your point. But it still hurts
If I had to sum this story up in one word, that word would be cringy.
It has all the tropes tossed together with no coherence, no discernable plotline, and no cares given to characterization. It honestly reminds me of shows like Dumb & Dumber, or Pet Detective.
All in all, this is not to my taste, but I can see that a lot of people would love it. So keep it up, I guess?
8193206 oh thank you, good sir/lady
8193878 You're welcome!
Dinky... you little conspirator
This is borderline cringe. This is really me enjoying this as pure shitposting. There is not much substance or quality and it pretty much is just about nothing.
It doesn't mean it isn't enjoyable to read. Like a guilty pleasure, or having chips instead of a really good dessert. Like a cleanser to enjoy different stories.
I'll add it to my tracking for now. You keep having fun with this as you will.
I know not if IED is an actual disorder, if it is I'm sorry if anyone has it...
But t sounds like a reverse acronym made to fit IED because then he's literally an IED.
(Improvised explosive device for you plebs out there)
8193206 soul of cinder nice choice
This 'character development' is a little forced. 'She understands' well, who wouldn't understand? Its like all bottled up. And was Lyra always going to be a tentacle monster, because that came out of left field, seemingly in response to an audience member suggesting it, but maybe I am mistaken. Just know, not everyone who replies has good ideas. Also Derpy hitting harder than AJ makes no sense, or every mother in equestria saving their child would be able to save equestria already due to any plight. Like, the elements of harmony? Who needs em, we got a pissed off mom over here. Tirek would've never happened, then again, this is before Tirek, but who cares, the principle remains. And if you just got the Lyra idea because you think the audience is better at writing, you are really devaluing yourself too much thus overvaluing their opinions, and did people make you think you need to write a certain way or did you always want this kinda character development?
But yeah aside from that the first 3 chapters were good. Well, if I can get past the fact Dinky is good at BB lol.
REEEEEEEEEEAALLL DUUUBSTEP!!!!! Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaa!!
Gotta say, just for those who are curious. This isn't a story to be taken too seriously. It's ridiculous. that's the point. Yeah I want to provide a little realism at times, but mainly this is just my stupid story idea.
8194355 If you were curious
I can't believe I inspired this piece of work.... I'm happy with what's going on, keep on with what your doing buddy. Maybe....Dakota could be teleported to him by accident and train him in some eldritch magic....eh, how about that?
8194915 That might be a possibility. We'll have to see. It may fit better as a one-shot
Eldritch: "Wait I know you!"
Dakota: "You do? How"
Eldritch: "I read about you! You're awesome!"
Dakota: "Ahh, that makes my head hurt!"
8194915 ALso OH MY GOD MY INSPIRATION COMMENTED ON MY STORY
Sorry... My fan got out
8194924 it'll just be a one shot chapter, nothing too complex. Sort of like that chess game of the gods deal, I think? and... nice to have someone fangirl over me.
8194943 One, that sounds great, we need to make that happen. Two, fanguy
8194955 just lemme come up with a plan and I'll send it to you. Eldrich will have some fun with our favorite loli.... Not the dirty kind, get your mind out of the gutter!
8194964 Sounds fantastic! I'm so excited! One of the whole reasons I wrote this was to go against most normal tentacle monster cliches.
It actually means that you're angry all the time and just pretending to yourself that you're not, because admitting that the violent vindictive jerk didn't just lose control rather than who you really are would be more painful to you than having to repress your real feelings all the time.
here is one other amazing rendition of leviathan