The main character Iron Hoof is challenged throughout this story. Iron Hoof's loyalty to his father Golden Hoof is questioned when he is forced to make a life changing decision. Iron Hoof must fight an internal war to prevent an external one. Golden Hoof's plan must be stopped and Iron Hoof is the only pony to do the job.
The intro is very boring. Iron Hoof must do this, he must do that.
8179232 Thank you for the feedback, I will try an make it more interesting.
Funny. I'm planning to make a story called Iron Hoof based on the tv series "Iron Fist".