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Zelatrix


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Pinkie Pie is almost at the end of her pregnancy, and there's no doubt that it has taken its toll on her. Carrying twins is no easy task, and she's about to find out that delivering them isn't easy either. But she's thankful for at least one thing; she has her friends with her every step of the way. Oh, and her foals as well.

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Well, a surprise has certainly been delivered :pinkiehappy::yay:

I think you need to add the "sex" tag to this story (but keep the teen rating), what with the mentions of Pinkie getting aroused and climaxing while pushing her foals out.

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I see where you're coming from with that one. At the time, it didn't really cross my mind, but I've added it now. Did I do a good job with the story?

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Well, I didn't notice any jarring errors, grammatical or otherwise, and I generally enjoy stories centered around pregnancy... so, yeah, you have an upvote from me :twilightblush:

I wouldn't mind seeing a prequel or a sequel. *hint hint*

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