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Bright Eclipse


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In a small town on the edge of the equestrian border an old unicorn with magic that rivals that of Twilight Sparkle herself, is finally seeing the fruits of fifty years of research. He has found a way to track down and destroy, or at least scatter, the elements of disharmony. But powerful spirits took notice of the magical surges caused by the elements and one in particular recognized what was possible if she could gain control over this unicorn: return from the spirit world. This spirit was the spirit of Night Mare Moon, after having been separated from Princess Luna by the spirits by harmony and the ponies who had wielded them. This unicorn had no idea of the events he was about to set in motion. Events that would bring a new and extremely powerful alicorn of the night into the world.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 9 )

FIRST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :trollestia:

twenty-nine views, two likes, and two dislikes, better than i expected for sure!

Not to far away a dark spirit
Not too far away, a dark spirit

Of course he couldn't here her
Of course, he couldn't hear her

The Old unicorn
The old unicorn

"Your doing it again"
"You're doing it again"

"Yes, its this proposal of there's
"Yes, its this proposal of theirs

"well...perhaps not to brief."
"well...perhaps not too brief."

Thanks! I try to look over it after I finish a bit, but it seems that i missed a lot.

I've decided that, unless for some reason i get spammed with comments to do otherwise, I'm only releasing chapters once they hit one thousand words or more.

Oh, an OC tag! I wonder... wait... "The Unexpected Ali-"
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