Vigil Eternal

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Crescent Glaive

Crescent Glaive #1 · Jan 31st, 2017 · · · New Quest, New World ·

In the description:

the Collage of Winterhold

you mean "College"

Crescent Glaive

Crescent Glaive #2 · Jan 31st, 2017 · · · New Quest, New World ·

This certainly starts of nicely and it catches my interest well.... so i will follow this story and see where it will go

Nitpick:

But their stood one man, quietly waiting on a mountain.

should be "there"

also....

The princesses grabbed the weapons they carry with them at all times and entered the forest.

I doubt that they actually carry them on their person at all times.... i think it is more likely that they carry them at all times with them yes, but they store them in a personal pocket space where they can summon them when they need them instead of carrying them out in the open where anyone can see them