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General_Maverick


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The story is a sanctioned spinoff of Kickass22urmom's Living the dream. For those who haven't read his story Heres the idea: The 2012 rapture has come and earth is gone all the people are given a choice ,heaven or hell, or another chance of life in a new world of their choice. I choose Equestria, and begin a new life of adventure making friends along the way.
~Author: Maverick, Editor: Cloudcutter

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 18 )

Sounds pretty good~ Can't wait for a new chapter~:pinkiehappy:

This is CloudCutter Editor/Co-Author. I'd just like to say thank you for reading our story! Maverick and I are working hard to get this story up and going, so we hope that you like it.
Now,General info we are shooting for one chapter a week or even more if possible. Also we are looking for some comments/feedback on the story i.e. What you guys liked, What you disliked, What do you want to see etc.

I agree! :)

YOU as the reader, must help us! WE need feedback, and without feedback it becomes harder for us to write a good story. If you have any comments, and please be honest and reasonable, we will try to work on those and improve our story.
As my co-writer CloudCutter said we will try to put up a new chapter or more a week, but with me busy with school and job searching, writing takes precious time. That is why we need feedback so we know what to focus on, whether it is entertainment, detail, whatever it is ya'll want.
So please, give us a quick review of the story, or if you want send some constructive criticism. Thanks as always! :pinkiehappy:

~Maverick

Flashback within a flashback in the beginning:applejackconfused::applejackconfused::applejackconfused::applejackconfused::applejackconfused::applejackconfused::applejackconfused::applejackconfused::applejackconfused::applejackconfused:

This story is quite intriguing, I look forward to upcoming chapters.

Im not well know in the slightest on here but I think I'm decent at writing and so far I see absolutely nothing wrong with your spelling and grammar, the plot is moving at a nice pace and the character is very well developed. I like how you give information about your character through reading and not out right telling us about him.

Can't wait for your next chapter.
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Thanks for the encouragement Wordsmith. Maverick and i have been working hard to do exactly that.

I'd like to apologize right now for the lateness of chapter 3, We are having ........complications .... with some dialogue.

Dont worry though it will come soon I promise

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Take all the time you need to perfect your writing, there are plenty of other stories i can read in the mean time. Infrequent awesome updates are better than frequent mediocre ones. Have fun writing:pinkiehappy:

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yes but it is the authors, or in this case the editor's, duty to at least let people know when we cant meet a deadline

P.s. from now on i'm going to make "Infrequent awesome updates are better than frequent mediocre ones" my moto as it rings true (i believe anyway) in everything we're trying to do

919458 True keeping your readers in the know is a good idea too.

P.S. Nice motto.

Hey Wordsmith, Thanks for your comment it really boosted our spirits.

By the way, I'm the author. I'm responsible for all skeletal content...and grammar nazi type corrections.

You should follow me as well...

OK everypony, we are currently doing a rewrite of chapter three. We will have it back up tomorrow.

I apologize for all the errors, and mistakes.

First!! Great story, I'll be anticipating an update

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........Thank you for the ......informative post:ajbemused:

Hey, fellow bronies and pegasisters alike! Lightning Blaze here. I would just like to say thank you to the authors, General Maverick and Cloudcutter alike, for putting my OC in their incredible story. I'd also like to thank anypony who comments, likes, and reviews the story. Any input is welcome. You guys are doing a great job, pacing is good, the characters are coming along fine, and I've got a feeling it's going to get better. Brohoof to the authors and to the readers /)(\

Hello sir or madame,

I am Obsidian Raindrop the creator of a group known as The Great and Not Obsessive Trixie I am here to ask if you would like your story to be added to my group.

The only requirements are:

1. You have a story about Trixie and she is not completely obsessing over her lose at the hands of Twilight. (She can hate that she lost to twilight and even try and beat again but she just can't be be so obsessive like she is in most stories. )
2. She may be a supporting character or a main character it does not matter.
3. i can`t think of a third thing

It's me Osidian again asking you guys to do stuff you don't want to.

1. tell me the name of your story and the one folder you want it in

2. join the group it is really cool and we'll soon get a banner up

3. fallow because it will boost my confidence

Sorry to all those who either received this email twice or who don`t have trixie as a main or supporting character. Also just PM me if you want your story added.

Yours truly, Obsidian Raindrop

Bruh. Is you dead? Or did you completely abandon this story?

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