That took several turns that I wasn't expecting. Celestia didn't just get flustered; she got a little horny? There was certainly much less outright aversion than I thought there would be.
And then she suddenly had the courage to jump in on a possible date? It felt far too easy. I figured the three other princesses were going to have to drag her stuttering and blushing to Fancy, and then have to shove her into a date proposition.
8175760 Yeah, Celestia isn't exactly the standard "mousy girl cleans up well" trope. Yet everyone seems to think she's in desperate need of a makeover at minimum. Bizarre, to say the least.
Excellent progression in this story. I hope Celestia does find herself a special somepony.
I've always shipped her in my head cannon with Starlight--no, not Twilight's apprentice but the stead of Rainbow Bright. Guy's tall, can walk on clouds and rainbows, and is witty. Good match.
This is pretty interesting. One pointer though, try not to put the character's title before their name every time they come up i.e "Princess Twilight elbowed Celestia's side" Just put their name.
Cadance is lying it on a little thick, isn't she? It's as if she didn't care for how Celestia wants things to proceed. Heh, the princess of love, and her husband is the prince of cuck in that case
Anyway, at least Twi and (probably) Luna are there to temper Cadance's ideas.
So, Fancy, huh? At least he's one of the good guys.
8176921 It was supposed to be just [teen] rated. At any rate, it's not clop.
8177976 There's a method to that madness. Celestia's narrator's use or absence of official titles reflects how confident Celestia is feeling at the time.
Finally, though, she reached the doors to the throne room. Her guards seemed surprised to see her approaching – for all they knew, she was still inside.
Heh, now that you mention it...
I wonder what Celestia's guards thought when Princess Luna led a veritable army of bat pony guards into the throne room. She's beyond such reproach, of course, but now it puts into my mind words like revolution and coup d'état.
what about fleur? what's her relationship to fancy pants in this story? or is he going to have to let tia down gently
Is Fancy Pants married to Flur da liss in this story, or no?
That's racist, Twilight. For shame.
I certainly hope the Spa ponies can make Celestia, the Standard of Beauty in Equestria look hot.
Also despite the fandom's love of using Fleur as a character in fan fics... what it every really implied she was anything serious to Fancy Pants?
Got a good laugh at Celly seeing suggestive thing's everywhere
That took several turns that I wasn't expecting. Celestia didn't just get flustered; she got a little horny? There was certainly much less outright aversion than I thought there would be.
And then she suddenly had the courage to jump in on a possible date? It felt far too easy. I figured the three other princesses were going to have to drag her stuttering and blushing to Fancy, and then have to shove her into a date proposition.
Wait, crossover? With what?
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Yeah, Celestia isn't exactly the standard "mousy girl cleans up well" trope. Yet everyone seems to think she's in desperate need of a makeover at minimum. Bizarre, to say the least.
Excellent progression in this story. I hope Celestia does find herself a special somepony.
I've always shipped her in my head cannon with Starlight--no, not Twilight's apprentice but the stead of Rainbow Bright. Guy's tall, can walk on clouds and rainbows, and is witty. Good match.
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That is quite the ship, and I approve.
This is pretty interesting. One pointer though, try not to put the character's title before their name every time they come up i.e "Princess Twilight elbowed Celestia's side" Just put their name.
8176709 Thanks! I liked to think so.
Cadance is lying it on a little thick, isn't she? It's as if she didn't care for how Celestia wants things to proceed.
Heh, the princess of love, and her husband is the prince of cuck in that case
Anyway, at least Twi and (probably) Luna are there to temper Cadance's ideas.
So, Fancy, huh? At least he's one of the good guys.
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I'm thinking Fleur is more of a daughter or sister...
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Racist, but true. ^.^
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Well, she was all over him... Certainly very comfortable with touching him...
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I've got to take some shortcuts, or this is going to be 100,000 words long!
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The 40 Year Old Virgin
It's a forgettable rom-com ... but it's interesting to apply its premise to Celestia instead.
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Hopefully, I can explain that in the next chapter a little better.
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With who?
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It was supposed to be just [teen] rated.
At any rate, it's not clop.
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There's a method to that madness.
Celestia's narrator's use or absence of official titles reflects how confident Celestia is feeling at the time.
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Prince of cuck.
I like it! ^.^
Heh, now that you mention it...
I wonder what Celestia's guards thought when Princess Luna led a veritable army of bat pony guards into the throne room. She's beyond such reproach, of course, but now it puts into my mind words like revolution and coup d'état.