What if Princess Luna/Nightmare moon did escape without Princess Celestia knowing... as a young pure-bred Alicorn, Cosmic Star learns the secrets of the past bearers of the Elements of Harmony and its history of its powerful magic of Friendship and its Peace and Harmony of Equestria. With the help of friends, she discovers her destiny of an Alicorn and the bears the Elements before the Sun and Moon War.
I like this.Great work
This is quite good.I'm impressed :D
I mean you have some grammar mistakes but I don't mind I'ts really cool!
Thank you so much for the comments ;)
7873518 No problem. Sorry if I am bothering you but do you plan on posting a next story?
7875999
Soon, its taking up progress...
7876558 Nice, nice.