Fluttershy can't feel any emotions, her father is worried about her, he finds somepony by the name of Twilight Sparkle to help her. The two become very close, but Fluttershy's mother is manipulative, if she wants Fluttershy to break Twilight's heart, she will get what she wants
(btw I named the family Lis' because it seemed the right amount of weird and kinda creepy)
Partly inspired by Great Expectations by Charles Dickens
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Great start!
Poor Flutters, tho..
Twilight, please help this mare!
Please continue! I love it already!
How is this story partly inspired by Great Expectations?
7860657 Pip and Estella meet when he is brought to Miss Havisham's ill-kept mansion, Satis House, ostensibly to satisfy the elder Miss Havisham's "sick fancy" to be entertained by watching Pip and Estella play together. It is later revealed that her desire is to have his heart broken by Estella.
I changed it up a bit, instead of coming to play with Fluttershy, Twilight came to help her.
Miss Havisham's character I put as Fleur, she wants Fluttershy to break Twilight's heart :)
I wonder if this an omen- you actually published this on my birthday.
Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaa, I really, really love the concept that you're going on with this. It's so unique and the setup is really nice. Really loving the setup with Fluttershy & Twilight too with this & am curious to see how it plays out with them as also with the backstory set up with what's going on between Fluttershy & her mother. Honestly the whole concept of not being capable of having emotions is great and you're really able to pull off that offsetting, uncomfortable and creepy kind of feeling. Definitely am looking forward to it if you ever decide to work on it more! You do what you need to do but I will definitely be following this! I'd also would be happy to proof-read it if you'd like. Regardless, I like this concept and even if it either doesn't update or takes a while I still love the unique concept with this!! Hope you're doing well!