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Light755


I write sad stories

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The seaside party town of Whitewater is quite the tourist attraction in Equestria. It's a delightful, backwater town filled with activities for ponies of any interest. The party scene is quaint, but enticing; the waves are ripe for surfing, and the warm, sandy beaches are a pinnacle of relaxation.

Steam Punk is new in town and finds himself engulfed in the town's hedonism, especially after meeting local party-girl Starlight Glimmer. Ponies are acting strange and inexplicable phenomena start happening. To make matters worse, he's having trouble remembering things...

What's really going on in Whitewater?


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Description and idea alone have my full attention. Kinda late here, but I'll be sure to put out a two cents when I read it tomorrow. :twilightsmile:

Definitely a good start, and I will keep reading the next chapters.

I wouldn't see Starlight anywhere near a step up as an extrovert as Fluttershy but it kinda works somehow. I am interested

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Her characterization will make more sense in future chapters

Not as awful as other fics here, but this OC is just too punchable for me.

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