• Member Since 28th Mar, 2018
  • offline last seen Oct 19th, 2019

Fluttercordia


I'm one of the co-production managers at an Opera house in Australia by day. Wannabe Fanfic writer by night.

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A lost prince and princess, A corrupted forest, and a strange unknown magic.
The royal sisters are at war, a battle thats been raging for a little over 200 years.
And Every 10 years a mare is chosen to live with the Lord, Fluttershy is one of the few in the small side of Equestria that has been born under the year of Chaos, when she finds herself of age to be selected will she be chosen? or are there bigger things to fear than that of the rumoured immortal and powerful beast that protects the valley and looks to restore peace in Equestria.

WARNINGS:
There will be NO prologue, you will find out everything throughout the story.
sex tag for sexual themes, suggestive content and one or two detailed scenes.
narcotics tag for suggestive themes relating to one of the characters.
violence, death and gore are imminent, however I will try to tone down the gruesome parts.

Suggestive age for reading: 16+

TEMPORARY COVER ART BY: https://www.deviantart.com/probablyfakeblonde/art/Fluttershy-and-Discord-537175607

Chapters (12)
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Comments ( 20 )

Not a bad start, but you might want to work on your grammar and spelling. Also, it feels like you repeat the same phrases over and over when talking about Discord and the village. Other than that, I'm curious to read more.

Not to sound mean, but the repetition at the beginning of the chapter kinda spoils the tone. It just needs a little touching up.

I'm wondering why Discord has become such a kidnapper. I guess I'll have to wait and see.

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Thanks for the advice! Being such a beginner it's very important to get constructive criticism. If you notice any bad habits can you PM me or comment about them? Would you be able to point out the repetiveness so I can combat that and fix it now? X I've read through it and I noticed two but there could be more. And in regards to the "kidnapping" there's a very good reason ;) I'll update soon enough :raritywink:

I am so sad! I wanted more chapters! lol I was so into the story line that I didn't realized that there were no more!

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Thank you so much! I put a new chapter out right now, I will try to keep regular updates coming for you :heart: :twilightsmile:

This is so well done!! I can't wait for more. YES DISCORD. SHE HAS YOUR ATTENTION AND YOU KNOW IT!

I wanna know why the mane 6 are there! Well.. except rainbow. PLEASE Tell me Rainbow will make another appearance?!

Thank you for not just letting this die off immediately.

ok ok I was looking for fanfics to read and then I happened to stumble in yours and while I was a little intimidated at first b the size of the chapthers, I must say, I READ ALL IN ONE SIT
Your wirting is so fluid and very very addictive, I don't even know where to start with everything that I love where, the characters are on point, the lore is on point, the mysteries makes me create more and more theories on what is this and what is happening, and where is rainbow dash and ack, I cannot wait for more of this here, this fanfic got me more than addicted to it, and I am surprised that there isn't more people reading it, because it's just so super and well written!
You should post this on fanfiction.net too if you are't already, more people should see this :heart: :heart: :heart:
I can't wait for the next update!

This is a great story!

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This would have to be one of the best compliments on any one of my stories thus yet! You have motivated me to take this piece by the horn and truly put my heart into it. It isn't that I didn't have my heart in it before. But I definitely wouldn't want you or anyone else to be left hanging. I hope this new chapter will be enough for now, but i shall put out more either tonight or tomorrow. I shall aim for two more in the next day or so. The answers will come. But my plans for this story is so in-depth it may take a few chapters for some to be answered, and more questions may arise in the process :raritywink:

I get a writer's block every now and then, but I will try to update more regularly! Thank you for sharing the love and I hope you all continue to enjoy this. It truly makes me happy!

If anyone has any advice please let me know, i am still fairly new at this after all!

P.S no I haven't uploaded to Fanfic.net yet! I don't believe I have an account on it. Perhaps I should get around to that today! x

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You have my word, that I will update as regularly as I can :heart: :twilightsmile:

Really enjoying this so far. Please don't take this wrong way, but your writing has greatly improved over the course of the story. Can't wait to see more!:twilightsmile:

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No offence at all! I'm glad I have improved :twilightsmile: expect a new chapter today! I'm so happy you're enjoying it, if you have any advice for me for future chapters and any errors let me know! :heart:

Love the set-up so far!

Comment posted by KingOfLizardss deleted Dec 14th, 2018

Hi Mrdeadinside! I don't know why you deleted your comment as it didn't offend me at all! In fact I'm quite appreciative you're keen for the next chapter, to answer your question the next update shall be soon! I promise :)

This is amazing! I hope you continue ^^

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