Awesome chapters, you are doing a amazing job. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Great story, I like this more than the Star Wars one.
I want to die

R I P

“I DON’T WANT YOU TO –!” She cut herself off with a grimace, breathed in loudly, crossed her right foreleg across her chest, and extended it in front of her with an equally loud exhale. A huge, shit-eating grin on my face, I copied the action, replacing the breathing with “Sieg heil!”

This should not have made me laugh as hard as it did I couldn't stop laughing for a minute straight

The ultimate irony of the dead story is I'm confident that Daniel isn't from the equestria girls world and even if he wasn't kidnapped he wouldn't have gotten home.