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Omega6047


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Not bad for your first clop dude.

Dam...that was hot stuff:twilightblush::heart: I have read some hot reads before. And you are up there with them. Good work.

I just realized something. Was Fluttershy home during all of this? It is her house after all, and it was apparently the middle of the night when they got there... does that mean that Fluttershy was in her room the whole time, forced to listen to them going at it from just down the hall?

7550963 I think I mentioned that Fluttershy is away to visit her family in the main chapter. Animals in the cottage are the only ones who had to deal with it.

7552218 Oh, are you sure? If so then I guess I must have missed/forgotten that part, because I genuinely had no idea.

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There was also a matter of Fluttershy leaving the town for a while. She was leaving tomorrow morning, and since he and Twilight are coming back at night, he‘s going to be taking care of the animals in the cottage until she comes back.

I made a mistake, it was in chapter 26, not 28.

7552381 Ok, I found it, and since they stayed in Canterlot overnight, that would mean that Fluttershy had left at about the same time as the 'apple muse' part in chapter 28.

That. Was. Amazing!

fir a firs time clop chapter I can say it is good.
I give it a 7 out of 10.

Can you do the one with Rainbow Dash on chapter 18 :)

8408992
Maybe. If I get an idea to make it funny.

Holy heck that was hot!

Will this story have any sex scenes, implied or otherwise, where the woman does most or all of the work?

8584585
Dunno. Most of that is 100% made up on the spot.

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