As they turned at an intersection, and Carousel Boutique came into view, Starlight found her breathing became more laboured, and her guts started twisting upon themselves, as if trying to jump out of her boy and run back home.
There, finally pushed me over the edge with this chapter. I had to favorite it. A lot of writers overlook how hard the situation with Spike is for Rarity as well, so I really appreciate what you did her. Very well written and both characters really ended up pulling at my heartstrings a fair bit. Good Job
This is a fascinating look into Rarity's perspective on Spike's crush that I've never seen or considered before. I quite like it, and feel like it's a good fit for her character. Similarly with Starlight's perspective on sex. It's really cool to see these character studies played out, and it's given me a lot to think about with respect to their characterizations.
9548094 It's one I'm shocked to not see considered more often. Or at all. I suppose it's much easier to sympathise with those on the other side. 9548165 Choo-Choo! 9548521 This is probably the second most important chapter of the story, so I'm glad I managed to pull off an entertaining read alongside the heavier stuff. 9548801 I think more people are familiar with being on the "in-love" side of a one-sided affection, so it's easier to dwell on what that side feels. It's definitely something I'd like to see done more often than not at all, and hopefully this will inspire at least someone to think about how the other side feels. Nevertheless, I'm glad to have earned your favourite. I'll do my best so the rest of the story delivers the same quality. 9548904 I like to take the less beaten path. I think it can lead to some interesting places. I'm glad you liked the way they were handled. I thought for a long time what would be the best way to deal with Spike's crush on Rarity, and I think this is the best way I could've done it, considering the circumstances. Likewise for Starlight's view on sexual relationships. I hope that sense for control came through on previous chapters, but I think it would fit her earlier characterisation as well. I'm happy to know I made a good call.
Thanks for your comments, everyone! Look forward to the next chapter.
9549816 Starlight says in this chapter that she's not bothered by it. By this point in the story, she has already worked through most of her issues. Plus, I'm sure there's a few virginities Starlight can still lose, should that really bother her.
Sighing, she threw her head back and closed her eyes. The memories of the previous night played in a constant loop in her mind. A horrible, horrible loop. She saw herself in the bathtub after pleasuring herself, the reminder of Spike’s old crush, the realisation of how much he’d been ignoring once more, how she was falling in that cycle of self-loathing, and all the memories of days that were long gone.
Starlight's boy is sure having some problems.
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Oh, my.
Thanks, it's fixed.
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She's inside a boy, wow.
The words of wisdom from Rarity, they made this chapter perfect.
Wow
Threesome between spike, star and rares?
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Glimmer!
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I'm glad it worked!
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pls no booli
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Only time will tell.
Yeah, being loved when you don't love in return is definitely a bad position to be in too.
Love is difficult. It's lucky they've got Rarity working as Deputy Cadance.
Damn, I expected feels. But like, a bucket of feels. Not a speeding train of feels. @-@
Yeah, love this chapter. Deep talk with Rarity. Very nice!
There, finally pushed me over the edge with this chapter. I had to favorite it. A lot of writers overlook how hard the situation with Spike is for Rarity as well, so I really appreciate what you did her. Very well written and both characters really ended up pulling at my heartstrings a fair bit. Good Job
This is a fascinating look into Rarity's perspective on Spike's crush that I've never seen or considered before. I quite like it, and feel like it's a good fit for her character. Similarly with Starlight's perspective on sex. It's really cool to see these character studies played out, and it's given me a lot to think about with respect to their characterizations.
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It's one I'm shocked to not see considered more often. Or at all. I suppose it's much easier to sympathise with those on the other side.
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Choo-Choo!
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This is probably the second most important chapter of the story, so I'm glad I managed to pull off an entertaining read alongside the heavier stuff.
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I think more people are familiar with being on the "in-love" side of a one-sided affection, so it's easier to dwell on what that side feels. It's definitely something I'd like to see done more often than not at all, and hopefully this will inspire at least someone to think about how the other side feels.
Nevertheless, I'm glad to have earned your favourite. I'll do my best so the rest of the story delivers the same quality.
9548904
I like to take the less beaten path. I think it can lead to some interesting places.
I'm glad you liked the way they were handled. I thought for a long time what would be the best way to deal with Spike's crush on Rarity, and I think this is the best way I could've done it, considering the circumstances. Likewise for Starlight's view on sexual relationships. I hope that sense for control came through on previous chapters, but I think it would fit her earlier characterisation as well.
I'm happy to know I made a good call.
Thanks for your comments, everyone!
Look forward to the next chapter.
Next thing she starts having anxiety attacks over taking spikes virginity and not having one to give him.
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Starlight says in this chapter that she's not bothered by it. By this point in the story, she has already worked through most of her issues.
Plus, I'm sure there's a few virginities Starlight can still lose, should that really bother her.
She knew?!?!!
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Apparently, yes.
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I'm glad you're enjoying it so much! I'll do my best to keep delivering an enjoyable tale.
Man I really enjoyed this chapter. And I am loving Starlights character in this story... Good Job! GREAT STORY!
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While I agree with you, Rarity also uses Spike's feelings to her advantage so she isn't completely innocent.
"Isn't it nice to have friends?"
I wouldn't know!
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That's why we have fiction!
Post-nut clarity hit her hard, aye?