There was something in Twilight’s voice she couldn’t quite pinpoint. It was an odd kind of sadness. She tried really hard not to make assumptions about what that said about Twilight’s sex life.
Twilight needs a hug. Several hugs. Over time, not all at once. Maybe a talk with Thorax over how change can be a good thing. He'd know, on a couple of levels.
Of course, she also needs to find some romance since she's clearly lonely in that regard. But one thing at a time.
Sooo... not quite a thermonuclear explosion but still well handled. Though I feel for poor Twilight, seemingly sudden changes just rubbing it in her face wherever she goes. And an epilogue to come as well? Color me intrigued.
P.S: Hope you're doing well in these unfortunate times.
Just, even with the thought of a romantically lonely Twilght, I rather not have her just be thrown into the game just to be counted as a player. Would look really cheap with the level of love that went in to this story.
P.S.
Spike’s laughter filled the room. As it died down, she extended a wing and brought Starlight closer to his body. “I’ll take that as a compliment.”
I think you meant
As it died down, he extended a wing and brought Starlight closer to his body.
Can't let your greatness stay with typos!
Love the chapter, ending and gif. Let the cheesy be doubled!
I updated on April's Fools so the joke would be on everyone who skipped this chapter thinking it would be a prank. 10160007 No, thank you for reading! 10160098 Hopefully some of that sweetness will rub off on Twilight. 10160131 Me too. That's why God invented fanfiction. 10160217 Awww... Thank you! 10160318 Twilight does deserve to get some. If you think Starlight suffered in this one, you have no idea what I have in store for Twiggles. 10160364 There will be plenty of hugging in Twilight's future! And hopefully contact between other body parts. 10160705 As fun as it would've been for Twilight to burst a vein, this week has done a lot at breaking her spirits. At some point you get tired and just start taking what life throws at you.
Hope you're doing well in these unfortunate times.
There are eight confirmed infections in my neighbourhood. I'm hunkering down with my laptop, a stick, and a spray bottle full of an alcohol and chlorine mixture. 10160918 Twilight will have her own journey to travel, don't worry. And thanks for the catch.
Thanks for reading, everyone. While you wait for the epilogue, here's a deleted scene from this chapter:
“Oh, don’t worry, Twilight. Starlight wouldn't do that. She’s good now, remember?” Spike smirked. “She wouldn’t cast a spell that made someone go crazy with love. Who would do something like that? I just can’t imagine.”
Starlight felt a small pang of pain at the reminder of her past transgressions, but there was something she didn’t get. Spike’s comment had seemed like a jab at herself, so why was Twilight the one who got as red as a tomato?
“Spike…” Twilight started, her eyes narrowing and her voice becoming strained.
For his part, Spike was now grinning widely. “I mean, could you imagine somepony casting a spell that made ponies act all crazy? Why would anypony want to do it? Personally I see no need for it.”
His grin turned more mirthful just as Twilight got redder and redder and Starlight got more confused.
“I think I’m out of the loop here…” she said, her eyes going back and forth between Twilight and Spike.
Spike leaned towards her and asked “Are you familiar with the ‘Want It. Need It’ spell, Starlight?”
“Isn’t that the spell that makes people go all—” Starlight gasped once it all clicked. But… that couldn’t be, right? Eyes wide and mouth open in shock, she turned to face Twilight. “No… Twilight, you didn’t.”
“To think we went five years without bringing it up…” the alicorn replied without looking up.
I couldn't find a good place to integrate this with the flow of the chapter, but imagine it happened.
Comment posted by Zaid ValRoa deleted Apr 6th, 2020
This is such a happy story and I want to say thanks for making me smile.
yes, but it's a Gouda way to end
I feel a bit sorry for Twilight on a few fronts at the end there, but gosh is this story still so sweet.
Epilogue here we come!
That gif is so cute, I wish it was canon
Great story
Coming Soon: Accismus 2: Let’s get Twilight laid!
Twilight needs a hug. Several hugs. Over time, not all at once. Maybe a talk with Thorax over how change can be a good thing. He'd know, on a couple of levels.
Of course, she also needs to find some romance since she's clearly lonely in that regard. But one thing at a time.
Sooo... not quite a thermonuclear explosion but still well handled. Though I feel for poor Twilight, seemingly sudden changes just rubbing it in her face wherever she goes. And an epilogue to come as well? Color me intrigued.
P.S: Hope you're doing well in these unfortunate times.
Great chapter, at your highest level of skill!
Just, even with the thought of a romantically lonely Twilght, I rather not have her just be thrown into the game just to be counted as a player. Would look really cheap with the level of love that went in to this story.
P.S.
I think you meant
Can't let your greatness stay with typos!
Love the chapter, ending and gif. Let the cheesy be doubled!
D'awwww. All of the adorable!
I updated on April's Fools so the joke would be on everyone who skipped this chapter thinking it would be a prank.
10160007
No, thank you for reading!
10160098
Hopefully some of that sweetness will rub off on Twilight.
10160131
Me too.
That's why God invented fanfiction.
10160217
Awww... Thank you!
10160318
Twilight does deserve to get some.
If you think Starlight suffered in this one, you have no idea what I have in store for Twiggles.
10160364
There will be plenty of hugging in Twilight's future!
And hopefully contact between other body parts.
10160705
As fun as it would've been for Twilight to burst a vein, this week has done a lot at breaking her spirits. At some point you get tired and just start taking what life throws at you.
There are eight confirmed infections in my neighbourhood. I'm hunkering down with my laptop, a stick, and a spray bottle full of an alcohol and chlorine mixture.
10160918
Twilight will have her own journey to travel, don't worry.
And thanks for the catch.
10161001
All of 'em!
Thanks for reading, everyone. While you wait for the epilogue, here's a deleted scene from this chapter:
I couldn't find a good place to integrate this with the flow of the chapter, but imagine it happened.
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That deleted scene was hilarious by the way.