9457641 I hope it will be! 9457676 9457674 The story is written up in advance, I'm currently working on the last couple of chapters. I'll update weekly as I give final revisions to the chapters. I hope you'll enjoy it!
9457708 I wanted to make sure to cover my bases. Also, I wanted Spike to be a bit bigger to facilitate kissing during lovemaking without forcing them to contort their bodies for long periods of time.
“I’m not giving you Atlantic Avenue,” he huffed as he sat back. “Oh, come on,” Starlight said, abandoning her playful bravado as though a switch had been flipped in her mind. She slammed her hoof down on the table, causing the board and little plastic pieces to rattle. “I’m not doing it. You already own most of the properties on that side of the board,” Spike said, pointing at the differently coloured cards the mare had in front of her. “I’m offering you Water works and the Eastern Railroad for it,” Starlight said as she idly twirled the dice with her magic.
Oh, God, they're playing Monopoly! Not a good idea! That game's been known to lead to ruined friendships, divorce, assault, broken bones, bruises, black eyes, cuts and scrapes, even death!
9458352 I know, I'm just the worst. 9458295 2016, actually. I started writing it after S6 premiered, but I'm only posting it now because the story is mostly complete. Real life, uni, and me being a lazy daisy prevented me from writing. The benefit of having waited so long is that I can keep a steady stream of updates until the story is over. 9457927 At least it's not Risk. And thanks for the catch, I must've had too much Starlight in my mind. 9457789 9457743 I'm glad you liked this, and I hope to deliver an entertaining story.
Thanks for the comments, everyone. It means a lot.
Good work. The subversion at the start was brilliantly done with a twist that was pleasant. You established and developed naturally the dynamic between the two.
And you got straight to the premise within the first chapter.
I've been waiting patiently for a good Spike x Starlight fic. Nice and evenly paced, believable, and entertaining enough to keep up with. You got my vote buddy boi
9459275 Yay! 9459379 Will definitely do so! 9459625 This story has been planned from a long time ago. Just look at the story number. I'm only publishing now because I can keep a constant stream of updates and not leave months-long gaps between chapters like I have with other stories.
I took to this ship far more quickly than I thought I would.
Although with the propriety of dating it is bugging me that Spike is the one who has to decide on the first date, when it should be Starlight since she is the asker.
Knowledge is fun! i.imgflip.com/ynes5.jpg It's the common shape of a reptilian's penis. 9461962 No. He's just over 18 years of age. It's all nice and legal.
9462064 Aging Spike up served my purposes. I want them to be comfortable during lovemaking. Spike's current height would require Starlight to bend her neck in a way that wouldn't be comfortable for long periods of time. i.imgur.com/nCLvF0C.png
Depending on your personal timeline, Spike is likely 18 in the show anyway since he’s 10-15 years younger than Twilight. But more years are a good idea anyway, dragons aging slowly and all that.
Someone needs to introduce Spike to some better board games. And I won’t tell Starlight Monopoly was designed as a morality tale about the flaws of capitalism if you don’t...
9457721 Logistical concerns are always important to consider in intersperses relationships.
9462454 I wanted to cover my bases, plus, Starlight is going to explore the matter of Spike's age at length. 9462549 There is nothing better than a consensual relationship between two loving adults. ... Maybe picaña. 9463283 I'm not going to say you're right, but you're not wrong either. 9464716
“I’d say long enough,” Starlight replied. “Want to forgo crass mercantilism and declare all our properties as free, equal opportunity housing for the populace?”
SpikeGlimmer from Zaid?! Break out the grilled cheese, this is gonna be awesome!
...I demand more...bring it to me at once!
Or you know, whenever ya get a chance.
Keep up the good work my good man
Are these chapters being published on a schedule or are you still actively writing it?
9457641
I hope it will be!
9457676
9457674
The story is written up in advance, I'm currently working on the last couple of chapters. I'll update weekly as I give final revisions to the chapters.
I hope you'll enjoy it!
In my headcanon, (as well as that of many others) Spike is already of legal age when Starlight appears on the scene
9457708
I wanted to make sure to cover my bases.
Also, I wanted Spike to be a bit bigger to facilitate kissing during lovemaking without forcing them to contort their bodies for long periods of time.
9457721
I hate being short some times, Between lovin and kissin I must of ran a hundred hooves, But the view from behind is glorious!
she had reconnected with Starburst after so long.
Sunburst is his name, i look forward to seeing more of this.
Now that's a good ship right there. I'm looking forward to more.
9457721
Fair enough. I shall give it a read
Oh, God, they're playing Monopoly! Not a good idea! That game's been known to lead to ruined friendships, divorce, assault, broken bones, bruises, black eyes, cuts and scrapes, even death!
Starburst is Starlight and Sunburst's lovechild!
is this from 2017 or 2019?
>cooking
You're a sick man.
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I know, I'm just the worst.
9458295
2016, actually. I started writing it after S6 premiered, but I'm only posting it now because the story is mostly complete. Real life, uni, and me being a lazy daisy prevented me from writing. The benefit of having waited so long is that I can keep a steady stream of updates until the story is over.
9457927
At least it's not Risk. And thanks for the catch, I must've had too much Starlight in my mind.
9457789
9457743
I'm glad you liked this, and I hope to deliver an entertaining story.
Thanks for the comments, everyone. It means a lot.
9458670 No problem, mate. Sparlight is definitely a ship that needs more love.
Good work. The subversion at the start was brilliantly done with a twist that was pleasant. You established and developed naturally the dynamic between the two.
And you got straight to the premise within the first chapter.
Good work.
~Yr. Pal, B
I've been waiting patiently for a good Spike x Starlight fic. Nice and evenly paced, believable, and entertaining enough to keep up with. You got my vote buddy boi
9459023
Aw, thanks. I hope the rest of the story will be to your liking.
9458930
That's some high praise. I'll work hard to not let anyone down!
Congratulations, you've been featured.
I like it! Please continue!
Im kinda confused, all these comments are from like today and yestersay but it says july 2017 under the chapter
9459275
Yay!
9459379
Will definitely do so!
9459625
This story has been planned from a long time ago. Just look at the story number. I'm only publishing now because I can keep a constant stream of updates and not leave months-long gaps between chapters like I have with other stories.
Karkat is involved? Definitely want to see how this goes.
I took to this ship far more quickly than I thought I would.
Although with the propriety of dating it is bugging me that Spike is the one who has to decide on the first date, when it should be Starlight since she is the asker.
...Do I even want to know what hemipenises are?
9461959
Knowledge is fun!
i.imgflip.com/ynes5.jpg
It's the common shape of a reptilian's penis.
9461962
No. He's just over 18 years of age. It's all nice and legal.
9462064
Aging Spike up served my purposes. I want them to be comfortable during lovemaking.
Spike's current height would require Starlight to bend her neck in a way that wouldn't be comfortable for long periods of time.
i.imgur.com/nCLvF0C.png
Hehehehe...the opening fake out was hillarious.
Depending on your personal timeline, Spike is likely 18 in the show anyway since he’s 10-15 years younger than Twilight. But more years are a good idea anyway, dragons aging slowly and all that.
Someone needs to introduce Spike to some better board games. And I won’t tell Starlight Monopoly was designed as a morality tale about the flaws of capitalism if you don’t...
9457721
Logistical concerns are always important to consider in intersperses relationships.
STAAARLIGHHHTTTT!!!!!!
Starlight: Y-Yes T-Twilight?
YOU HAD FEELINGS FOR SPIKE ALL ALONG HAVEN'T YOU!!!
Starlight: I-I-I!
STARLIGHT! You should have told me sooner! Do you realize how badly I want Spike to hook up with somepony or creature who cares for him as I do?
Congrats! If you need me for ANYTHING, you don't hesitate to let me know okay!?
Starlight: O-Okay...
9461962
how did you realize?
oak : ... I just have a question ... Are you a boy or are you a girl? ...
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I wanted to cover my bases, plus, Starlight is going to explore the matter of Spike's age at length.
9462549
There is nothing better than a consensual relationship between two loving adults.
...
Maybe picaña.
9463283
I'm not going to say you're right, but you're not wrong either.
9464716
aw this was cute
9462211
On the other hand, if he's too much taller it seems like walking arm-in-hoof would be difficult.
9460540
Who?
Communist hors indeed.
Ok, best line of the chapter. This is adorable so far, the banter is well done and the scenes are well constructed.
Sounds like a good idea for a one shot story
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https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/NoodleIncident
Mmmm looks tasty
Yeah, that's so just like Starlight to just blurt out whatever's in her mind. Can't wait to see where this goes!
But I want the dragon fire!