Really love the way Trixie has been written. She sounds completely in character with how she'd interact with Starlight. Also, that unintentionally awkward moment between Starlight and Applejack was hilarious! Looking forward to what's to come.
Hmm. Hmm. Spike better have two now. Because I would hate for the moment to come, and he only has one bone for her to play with. Thx for another great chapter!
I apologise for the lack of update last week. I'll make a blogpost about it this weekend. Thank you all so much for reading and commenting, and I hope you'll look forward to the next chapter.
🤔 Now that I think about it, of Starlight's friends in the Mane Six, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Rarity, and now Applejack are aware of the relationship between Starlight and Spike, with each reveal nearly occurring in successive chapters. Would it be too bold of me to surmise that RD will be next to be informed?
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You could say that. Congratulations on recognising the pattern, though. 9577522 You know, I don't think I've read any Starlight/Twilight stories. I wonder how the portmanteau for that ship would work... Got any recommendations? 9577813 They've got a couple of days left, yes.
Thanks for reading, everyone. And thanks for taking the time to leave a comment.
9578074 While I do have an idea for a sequel--and it would indeed feature a threesome!--I don't want to make anyone too excited about that one while this is still incomplete. Time will tell.
I love how every time Starlight gets over one mental hurdle involving her relationship with Spike, another one comes rising up to slap her right in the face. Like Trixie, her discomfort amuses me.
Been meaning to say this from chapter 1, but I've been watching Food Wars lately and I can't help but think how much the cooking aspects compare to that anime.
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I think I might just love this Trixie. She's getting under Starlight's skin in the best way.
Really love the way Trixie has been written. She sounds completely in character with how she'd interact with Starlight. Also, that unintentionally awkward moment between Starlight and Applejack was hilarious! Looking forward to what's to come.
Hmm. Hmm. Spike better have two now. Because I would hate for the moment to come, and he only has one bone for her to play with. Thx for another great chapter!
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Trixie was such a delight to write. I admit I also took a bit of inspiration out of the way I tease my friends. I'm happy to know the Smug and Teasing Zaid managed to make her entertaining.
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I may do a lot of things, but I would never lie to my readers.
I would, however, withhold information for the sake of making things more enticing, but you'll see.
I apologise for the lack of update last week. I'll make a blogpost about it this weekend.
Thank you all so much for reading and commenting, and I hope you'll look forward to the next chapter.
Trixie's Trixiness is extremely on point here. Love the dynamic you have between the two.
🤔 Now that I think about it, of Starlight's friends in the Mane Six, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Rarity, and now Applejack are aware of the relationship between Starlight and Spike, with each reveal nearly occurring in successive chapters. Would it be too bold of me to surmise that RD will be next to be informed?
Got to say. After Starlight +Twilight, my next favorite Starlight ship is Spike.
Great job with this.
Only way it could ever be better is if it was a threesome with Star, Twi, and Spike. But that's just me.
Man, I just can't stop loving these two mares!
Your take on Trixie is awesome, and I just love everything about this chapter! Great job!
Still got time before Twilight comes back.
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Trixie will stick around for a bit longer. I hope she'll remain enjoyable.
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You could say that. Congratulations on recognising the pattern, though.
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You know, I don't think I've read any Starlight/Twilight stories. I wonder how the portmanteau for that ship would work...
Got any recommendations?
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They've got a couple of days left, yes.
Thanks for reading, everyone. And thanks for taking the time to leave a comment.
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I know she can be more enjoyable as part of a threesome in a sequel!
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Obvious one would be TwiStar.
A play on TriStar. Which has a pegasus as their logo.
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While I do have an idea for a sequel--and it would indeed feature a threesome!--I don't want to make anyone too excited about that one while this is still incomplete.
Time will tell.
I love how every time Starlight gets over one mental hurdle involving her relationship with Spike, another one comes rising up to slap her right in the face. Like Trixie, her discomfort amuses me.
I really like your Starlight and Trixie interactions. You can see why they're friends without dialing the Trixieness back.
Comparative anatomy is always fascinating isn't it.
Been meaning to say this from chapter 1, but I've been watching Food Wars lately and I can't help but think how much the cooking aspects compare to that anime.
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Aren't dragons wonderful~?