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ThatUnknownPony


You know me, I'm that pony you don't give a buck about, but that still here for some reason.

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After the Fall Formal incident in Canterlot High, things have changed around the school. Rumors of shadowy beings appearing in the darkest corners, stories about magical elements hidden among the walls, legends about an evil spirit that never left...
Not that anything like that matters to Dizzy, a simple student who can't give a damn about anything, that is until a new student arrives to turn his life upside down as they become friends, try to hook up with some girls, and somehow get involved in a mess of an odyssey to find some strange stones.
...So typical school life in Canterlot High.

A Story by: KingMario128
Edited by: ThatUnknownPony

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 4 )

"What a shame, Mr. Dizzy," Luna replied, her voice slightly getting more serious, maybe unusually serious. "I chose you for a reason, you've been turning away from others and acting very angrily since 'that day', so I've decided that either youbecome the guide to one of this boys or if you refuse, I'll expell you."

What does "youbecome" mean?

"I bet he'll get upset when he finds out this one isn't a pony," he snarked, but Luna yanked his ear in response. "OUCH OUCH! EXCUSE ME VICEPRINCIPAL

On another note, what does "viceprincipal" mean?

7523716 In the first case, it's meant to be "You become", it was a typo. My apologies.
And for the second case... I think it means the same as without a dash between "vice" and "principal".

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You understood I was being sarcastic, right? I just pointed those out to say "Hey, there is a mistake here!" I am not that dumb to not know what it means.

I hope you'll forgive me for this, but I actually HATED the way Applejack and Octavia were treating each other in this chapter as they were being mules to each other (no offense to the mules, by the way).

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