I was bitten. That's all I could think. Just when I thought things couldn't get worse, a magical portal opened up, and sent me to a world just as bad, if not worse than the one I'm from. All the while, I have to fight my growing hunger and instincts.
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What is this a crossover with?
Left 4 dead
Meh
I feel like this need more of a build up honestly, this just feels like a rush a to b situations I barely even feel the characters or the struggle or sympathise with him really.
The speed of progression is much too fast, and the lack of contractions in speech makes it feel awkward.
These errors are easily fixed though.
7479595 yup
a lot of times interesting ideas or ideas for COs tend to be poorly written (or updated infrequently/not at all) so rip
Is this story dead?