the eqg movie to jawmax we're all alicorn's one shot alt ending. the princesses of harmony arive at the crystal empire for there first royal summet. during the night how the elements of harmony are taken by three unknown ponies. twilight and her friends must go to this new world and find there elements but it turns out strange monsters are on the loose thankfully thise 6 mulite colored warriors are here to help but can the mane 6 and these 6 warriors stop this new evil or will equestria and this world be destroyed.
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Is English your first language? Just wondering...
7450169 yes you don't like it
Intresting concept you should get a editor it sounds like a play then a book
7450455 yeah i need an editor think you can be an editor
Sorry I'm not good enough, try contacting jawmax or someone from the power rangers group
7450182
That's not what I said. I asked you because I was genuinely curious. You don't seem to have much of a grasp of spelling or grammar, both of which are vital if you want to attract readers and positive feedback. I recommend consulting either the writing guide here on the site or another one on the net. If you follow them and apply the lessons therein to your writing, I'm sure you'll be pleased with the results. Best of luck to you.
7450502 okay but it is super sentai
7450637 okay thanks i will try my best
7450696
I hope you find the knowledge and confidence to succeed. It's not easy but it can be done. If I can do it, anyone can!
7450958 okay also i am getting a proofreader
7451073 Would it be okay with you if I do my own version of this team up story?
7451178 sure if you want but the mane 6 are meeting the kyoryugers
7451225 I know that.
7451245 okay
good job on the proof read.
7464782 thanks should i delete the old chapter 2
7464846 probably.
7464922 what
7464968 i mean ya. sorry i was not paying attention what you ask.
7464982 should i delete the old chapter 2 or no
7464986 ya
7464994 okay
7465013 this chapter is awesome can't wait for more to be updated
7451272 can't wait for there to be more chapters to this story these first two chapters are so awesome
7502805 no prob though right now i am in a writers block
7502822 ok take ur time and let me know of the updated chapters my friend
7521976 okay it may take a while
7523320 that's ok I can wait, besides I really like the first two chapters a lot
7523320 what's taking so long with the next few chapters it's already 2017
7862984 i have writers block i do not know if the mane 6 should reviele who they are now or on chapter 5
7863947 maybe you can have the girls revieal on chapter 4 and explain y they r here and have twilight sparkle and her friends can return to there home
7864566 okay they spend the night in a japaness hotel but do you have to take your shoes off before you enter the japaness hotel
7864760 I would think so if it's a Japanese hotel but they also speak really good English as well as Japanese but mostly English
7864767 all right then also how many chapters do you think this should be
7864809 I think it should be about 40 chapters or more if u want and probably get ranger forms, powers, and there own Morphers when they get there elements of harmony back. And the villains follow them back to the girl's home in Equestria and they won't know it. And the princesses get ranger forms too
7864835 well i can not do that many i was going to do maybe 7 or 8 chapters and i can give you the sequals after this is done
7864923 OK that sounds great my friend do it I'll be waiting my friend
7865209 it will take a while to be fair i may have hard time thinking of things to write cause of things going on in my life
7865261 OK just take ur time and I'll be waiting my friend and keep me posted on the story thanks
7865463 no prob also the timeline would be 2013 in this
7865684 ok that is great can't wait to read more soon my friend keep me posted
7865694 okay i have to think on things in chapters
7865760 go ahead and do that my friend I'll be waiting
7865769 you may wait a while
7865824 that's OK just try not to take too long with the story I'll be waiting my friend
7865824
any progress my friend
8309562
no sadly
Will be new chapter?