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That Unicorn horn shard... I can only guess one name:
SOMBRA >:)
The true antagonist is revealed.
Alpha Trixie's Manticore needs relief get to it..
I fed it Viagra and laxatives
sand blaster & vinegar baths
Coltan the Barbarian is standing by
the branding iron is good and ready
Alpha cup cakes
Angel bunny has the razor blades
Griffin chow Inc. has a back order to fill - Alpha chow
you can call Alpha -- Alpo.
A big part of me wants Luna to arrive as a big orbital (lunar?) laser strike. And then make a quip worthy of Schwarzenegger.
7689582 As you wish....
Sending help already? Would have been fun to see Twilight go down the bridle path.
7689582
So many Schwarzenegger lines to choose from.
Your clothes, give them to me.
That's one ugly mother fucker.
You’re a funny dog, Raarg, I like you. That’s why I’m going to kill you last, Because all fucking hell is going to break loose
Hasta la vista baby
Get to the chopper!
I going on a lime here and guessing that the dog has Sombra's horn hanging around his neck and that it is at least its fowl magic that is warping his mind and the dogs around him. I am not too keen on on having Sombra's himself direct involvement in it, I know it supposed to make make sense with the princesses bridles part that was told, and that he reuses of them in the enslavement of ponies figuring that it is what gave him the idea as well as helping him to be in a more dominant leadership for the dog. I would be more happy with the idea that he sent a search team to try and recover Sombra's horn and use it to manipulate the tragic chain of events that fell on all the dogs so that all the dogs wound unite under his banner so that the satisfied his ambition of fonding his own empire.
After thinking it over I think Slip had probably been a lot more resistant then Rarity in the mind conditioning seeing all the scars that he had hidden on his coat and was probably there a lot longer then then she was, sense he wasn't a high profile ponythe urgency of him being fond, couple with the fact that he was probably one of the first captured his situation was a lot more hopeless then Rarity's. But, despite that, he did fight on until his last onse of strength he had be fore he finally brook.
Pretty good chapter overall, but I really don't like the nonchalant way Twilight's friends and (especially) her brother react to the news that Twilight is in very serious danger. Twilight might even be already doomed for all they know, and they just shrug it off and ask politely how they can be of help. Feels OOC I think.
7690669 Fair comment. I had debated having more of a reaction from Shining and the other four but it just felt like it was bogging things down too much in a section where things should feel like they are accelerating and getting faster. Might have been a bad call on my part.
The last, and largest, piece of the climax should be up sometime tomorrow. Unless I get washed away. There is some heavy weather where I live at the moment.
Oddly when you mentioned n a cage and two personality all o can think of is DOG from Fallout new nagas.
Alos great read so far love it. Just the right mix. I was hesitant st forest to read it not sure onrhe reasons but still well with the read