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That Alpha better DIE in Fire, better yet have a Volcano open up under his butt so he can fall into a large pool of Lava and be taken out that way, I have no lover for Diamond Dogs that are bastards like that, the one's who tried to get Rarity free should have lived and escaped with her to Equestria.
I'm alive! What happened?
Amber and a wave of dragon storm troopers counter attacked
When your besties with a lord in charge of flying tank like flame throwers armed with razor sharp claws it's a no brainer...
Great but I thought you guys where under confinement
we escaped
Prince Blue Blood was head cheese of the guards
It was only a little dirt & cake honest
easy as pie
but the coming war
no problem as ashes have a hard time conducting buisness let alone pleasure.
plausable denyability I had no control and the attack was unauthorized by any Equestrian government
A solar flair ? (Like in Garble vs, Celestia?)
7650185 Those comments of yours remind me of the Deleted Scenes emoticon animations like this one. Very nice :)
If Rarity read this story, what do you think she would do to you?
7650257 Depends if I manage to write the climax and conclusion properly. If I succeed, maybe a fitting for a new suit. If I fail, a lifetime of subtly mismatched outfits.
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Poor Rares and Twi. damn good story...
Ah Rarity are you OK?
Valinte wants to play...
Sure I'm game she can join us...checkers, go fish, chess?
I have Apple Jacks rope...We can play ride a little dragon...
Where to? duh duh duh ah Rarity?????
Ya don't see that everyday in down town Ponyville a one dragon parade lead by Rarity...
plot twist!
So Rarity was just a bait the whole time, they wanted Luna to actually come to them. I think this was just genius to have such a twist in the story. I wander if the dogs have an insider to bring them Luna's bridle in the Canterlot vault. I thought the near escape of Twilight and Rarity was so well executed and progressively leaving some of Rarity escort to slow them down their pursuers was a great credible way to give the mentally exhausted Rarity to escape.
I can't wait to see the next chapter soon.
Wow, I actually didn't expect there to be death in this story O_O I thought this was supposed to be the non-dark ending?
Even though I said I like darker stuff, I'm still not comfortable with somepony dying. Eternal mind-enslavement I can deal with, but death is too much for me
It was a great chapter nonetheless, I was on the edge of my seat the entire time