Meanings is not important, I cannot be right all the time. Quite often I is left instead of right, and what I mean and what I say is two different things.
A collection of completed shorts that i write based off of concepts that i get throughout my day, and are either too small or are unstructured or random for them to stand on their own.
All the chapters are short stories, and all the stories upon uploading are complete.
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you did good in the first chapter but the second chapter has not details in it. Sense this is your first fiction I'll give you 3 points for idea and 2 points for trying it's and average of 5/10
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google translate gives me this
"You did good on the first chapter! But frankly i think the second chapter is lacking in details. But since this is your first fiction i think you should be judged a bit less painfully... The idea of shorts is pretty great, but based on the second chapter i'll give it about 5/10, with more details you can really be something!"
if this is right, thanks for the feedback b0ss. i'll try for a more refined look later in my stories!