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nobody_in_particular


I"m just me, trying to be me the best I can. Major LGBT supporter and obsesser over anime and cartoons. I write because I love sharing my ideas with others.

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This Hearts and Hooves Day Sweetie Belle is hoping to get Button Mash to like her as more than a friend. She's had a crush on him for years, but her constant fears of being rejected keep getting in the way. Not to mention Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon are always telling her how dumb she is for thinking Button Mash would ever like her. But this time Sweetie is going to confess her love for him, no matter what it takes. (A story I posted for Valentine's Day 2016 on fanfiction.net)

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"Tater Tot"

I didn't expect that. Not at all.
I have no idea how you want to make it work that Applebloom and Scootaloo know him, considering that he lives in a village far, far away from Ponyville, but only seeing him mentioned here amazes me, this is a huge surprise. :pinkiegasp:
Fanfics for the official comics are already so rare and barely happen, the books from the Daring Do Adventure Collection didn't get any. I'm thoroughly amazed by it to even find his name mentioned in a fic.

Unrelated to that, I want to add your fic to the Cutie Mark(ed) Crusaders group, but I find myself confused about if Sweetie Belle already has her (actual) cutie mark or not.
She thinks about her cutie mark at the beginning, but then she mentions Diamond Tiara harassing her, which the description does hint at as well.
Does she have a different cutie mark in your fic?

Good job great story only two spelling mistakes that i saw no other mistakes all around good although you could use another set of eyes to proofread

7359797 Actually, I wrote this before Crusaders of the Lost Mark, and I had no idea that it would be a thing. I supposed Sweetie Belle's Cutie Mark would have something to do with singing, even though it isn't mentioned here.

7361534

Thanks, I added it to the group now!

Say, what inspired you to add Tater Tot to the fic?

7361631 I just felt like there was an interesting shortage of colts in Cheerilee's school, because most of the students are background character who aren't named an only appear about once. Also, I just really like that Daring Do book and Tater Tot seemed like an interesting character that I wanted to add.

By the way, thanks for your comments and adding this story! :pinkiehappy::yay::eeyup::scootangel::heart:

7361647

Ah, so Tater Tot lives in Ponyville in your fic. That could need a serious sidefic to explain how he got there and why he moved from Marapore to Ponyville. :rainbowdetermined2:

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