Hello, I love writing and blogging. I have a blog on wordpress: thedorkslife.wordpress.com and PONIES ARE MAH LIFE
Rochelle Moore is a typical pegasister living a regular life. She is quite popular on Social Media, but not so popular in real life.One day, she and her best friends, Gabie Maxwell, and Daphne Kirenie [who are both pegasisters too] accidentally opened a portal to another dimension?
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I must have been gone too long. There are a more pegasisters coming out
sense this is your first fiction try to put more narrative... But sense your new here i'll give you 3 points for idea and 2 points for trying that's equals to five out of ten. it's complacently avrage
7386794 I don't understand what you are saying sorry.. I'm only 11
7408483 Narrative point of view: the perspective (or type of personal or non-personal "lens") through which a story is communicated
A narrator is a personal character or a non-personal voice that the creator of the story develops to deliver information to the audience, particularly about the plot. The narrator may be a voice devised by the author as an anonymous, non-personal, or stand-alone entity; as the author herself/himself as a character; or as some other fictional or non-fictional character appearing and participating within their own story.
In a first-person narrative, the story is revealed through a narrator who is also a character within the story, so that the narrator reveals the plot by referring to this viewpoint character with forms of "I" or, when plural, "we". Often, the first-person narrative is used as a way to directly convey the deeply internal, otherwise unspoken thoughts of the narrator.
Third-person narration provides the greatest flexibility to the author and thus is the most commonly used narrative mode in literature. In the third-person narrative mode, each and every character is referred to by the narrator as "he", "she", "it", or "they", but never as "I" or "we" (first-person), or "you" (second-person). In third-person narrative, it is clear that the narrator is an unspecified entity or uninvolved person who conveys the story and is not a character of any kind within the story.
Past tense
The events of the plot are depicted as occurring sometime before the current moment or the time at which the narrative was constructed or expressed to an audience.
Present tense
The events of the plot are depicted as occurring now — at the current moment — in real time. In English, this tense, known as the "historical present", is more common in spontaneous conversational narratives than in written literature. A recent example of this is the Hunger Games trilogy by Suzanne Collins.
Quite an interesting first chapter. I am noticing some errors in grammar and syntax, but other than that, not bad. On to the next chapter.
Alright, then. Can't wait for more chapters!
Also, "Somebody's POV" is better known as Third-Person POV, in case you were unaware.
7556603 Thank you veeery much for reading my story! I really appreciate it!
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Not a problem! Any idea when the next chapter will be out?
7556860 Maybe in a week or so? At least I hope..