• Member Since 30th May, 2016
  • offline last seen Mar 23rd, 2017

Luna Lily Ruby


Hi! Call me Lily! I was first introduced to the fandom when The Crystal Empire parts one and two, first came out on disk. I'm a HUGE fan of Luna, though no hate on any of the other princesses.#MLP4vr!

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What happens when a rare occasion comes to pass? A summer solstice and a full moon happens? "The stars shall aid in her escape." The stars is not a thing but a who... A certain Greek goddess by the name of Asteria. But why should she help? And who is she exactly?

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

Please don't use "whom" if you don't know how it's supposed to be used. It just looks bad. It's not just a fancy replacement for "who". :unsuresweetie:

7324825
Sorry. It's a bad habit. I REALLY need an editor! I need to flush it out more anyways, so I'll fix it. Thanks for letting me know, I never even realized!

Not a bad start if this is the first chapter of something. The characterization is, well, okay. The story is structured well, though I did kinda scratch my head at some of the dialogue. There's alot of room to grow here but I do see potential so good luck good fortune

7550916
Thx, IK that I've got along way 2 go, so... This was mean to be a one shot, but... Maybe I'll take ur idea up. Or we could cowrite the rest. IDK.:eeyup:

7551003 PM me anytime, one of the perks of having no social life is I'm almost always available

7551004
I'm gonna take u up on that.

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