Hot Coffee Quickies: Sunset & Sonata

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Minimoog Voyager

Minimoog Voyager #1 · Jun 20th, 2016 · 2 · ·

The sun-struck beauty

You're damn right

but the baby siren

Unf, you did it again!

You really went all-out on this one, and I love it. Instead of just having the two lovely ladies finish each other off in a quick, lazy few paragraphs, you dragged it out and and added a surprising amount of effort and detail into each little interaction. I absolutely LOVE the position Sonata was in (face-down-ass-up), as well. Easily my second-favorite position

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #2 · Jun 21st, 2016 · 1 · 1 ·

Will all of the Hot Coffee Quickies be F/F?

overlord-flinx

overlord-flinx #3 · Jun 21st, 2016 · 1 · ·

Polish it all up a bit, have someone look it over, and you could be rolling in some solid hits.

Fabulosity

Fabulosity #4 · Jun 21st, 2016 · · ·

7322582 Hah! It was candy for the mental picture you were putting together, amirite? LOL! Yeah, I had fun with this one and yeah I put in afew things I knew that would make some people 'tingle' when reading it, hur-hur! I am really happy you liked this one, as always! Also, second favorite? I wonder what the first one is?!

7323402 Nope! I've had afew small requests for pairings and such! However, I tend to write whatever is in my mind at that particular moment. But fret not, there will be M/M, M/F and more F/F to come! If you've any ideas, feel free to send'em my way!

7324236 Thank you very much for the positive suggestion, I appreciate people like you and you're feedback. I hope you continue to read my stories.

Minimoog Voyager

Minimoog Voyager #5 · Jun 21st, 2016 · 1 · ·

7324762 Oh, yes; there certainly was a tingle, alright
My favorite position would fall down to the cowgirl; both in practice and in fiction

Love the story, as always

chaoticevl

chaoticevl #6 · Jun 25th, 2016 · 1 · ·

While not bad, you did have one thing that just made this kinda odd to read. Some of your word choices make it sound like this is going on in their heads and not happening now. Lile "the teenage siren would squeal abit" this just sounds really strange when saying " the teenage siren squealed abit" sounds more its happening now.

Bryan Luna