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Candy Twinkle


Hooo boy, do I have a TON of ideas! The only problem is finding the time to actually WRITE them. They will be stuffed full of changelings though, just a warning. Because changelings are awesome

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Equestria has become a post-apocalyptic wasteland terrorized by roving bands of irradiated mutants. The princesses were vaporized years ago, the sanity scourge has turned unicorns into mad raiders, and the dead don't remain peaceful for long. Even the environment fights against ponykind as rivers dry up and ashen clouds block the sun. If anypony is to survive, they stand a better chance with friends, ponies who you can trust to keep you alive when your back is turned.
Which makes it all the more horrifying when Summer Breeze discovers her comrade-in-arms has been replaced by a changeling. Desperate not to lose the one pony she trusts absolutely, she must confront his replacement in order to pinpoint his location before time runs out, but how can she trust the word of a deceiver?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 7 )

So, is this Mad Max meets The Walking Dead, or?

Hmm, interesting. I'll have a look at this later.

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That... Is actually a pretty accurate description? Which is funny because I've seen neither of those, lol.

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Glad you liked it! :yay: Chapter two should be out around 2/5, where you'll get a teensy bit more backstory on the world.

7912157 Oh, I just wasn't sure if this was a part of a bigger continuity or something, since you mentioned that you "knew Turned was supposed to be lowercase", implying that there's a precedent for whatever process you're describing is.

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Nah, 'turning' is just their unique way of saying "becoming a zombie". It's not a proper noun, and therefore should be lowercase, that's all. This isn't a crossover with any other franchise, all mlp au. Again, ch 2 will go a little bit into the 'whys' and the 'hows'.

I do hope you expand on the background info/exposition, this does seems like an interesting universe. I think you should actually expand on Summer/Dusty's past as well--I want to know what happened with Berry Blossom and Buttercream!

Word of advice: especially on longer stories with lots of dialogue and multiple perspectives, adding a line of space between paragraphs makes things much cleaner and easier to read so that everything doesn't just blob up into a jumbled wall of text.

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Whoops, I was so excited to upload it that I forgot to indent :facehoof: Thanks for pointing it out! Glad you're enjoying it despite that. As for background, there's not going to be as much as you'd probably like, but I'll try and squeeze a bit more in. :twilightsmile:

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