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Nagel Navari


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The Rose School of Magic is regarded as one of the most prestigious academies in all Equestria. If legends are to be believed, it was co-founded in the early years of Princess Celestia's reign by the daughter of Princess Platinum Rose and the son of Clover Blood, The Clever. Despite the passing of centuries, and the occasional changes to both it's policies and location, the role of Headmaster being filled by a member of the Bloodrose family. Most importantly, the use of an entrance exam to gauge the strength of prospective students has remained unchanged


Cover by Silfoe, used with permission

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 6 )

“Mom, is it too late to go back and not take the test?” A colt inquiried, as he followed his parents along the streets of Canterlot.

Me exactly in a Supermarket

I have to say that this story looks like it could be quite interesting indeed. The exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are quite well done in all the right places. I especially liked Dusk's first meetings with Trixie and the other unicorn fillies, the explanation as to why Spike's egg was so difficult to hatch and Celestia's Discord-related flashback .

So, yes, I WILL definitely be looking forward to more of this.

Was that Starlight at the end?

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Not sure how you came to that conclusion, but she is an oc, who will continue to be mysterious for quite some time. However, her identity will be revealed before Starlight appears.

EDIT: The section in question, posted below, has been moved to the second chapter,

In a place beyond time and space, an alicorn floated in a purple void. “Dear Celestia, I hope you don’t get too attached to your precious little student. For one day, I’ll return, and I will take what is mine. As for you, I have quite a few plans in store for you, my little Duskie.”

Again, this is an excellent piece of work concerning the chapter. The exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are all well done in all the right places, as was how you continue to include details from much later in the series mixed with your own touches AND provided more information WITHOUT revealing too much too soon.

So, by all appearances, in THIS universe, the Sonic Rainboom was performed by Gilda's younger half brother instead of by Rainbow Dash.

I'm definitely going to be eagerly looking forward to more of this story.

Baby Spike is adorable. Interested in seeing who is the relative of who I suspect is this universe's version of Chrysalis. Well, the Princess of Food comment seems to imply that, anyway.

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