I'm a hero with coward's legs.
A war was waged long ago between humans and Equestria. Its inhabitants were defeated and sealed underground with an unbreakable magic spell. That's what the stories say, anyway. Rumours surround Mount Canter, where no human is supposed to go, and where a curious child has disappeared.
A 2nd person Human in Equestria story, inspired by Toby Fox's role-playing adventure game, Undertale.
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Finished Undertale and thought "I have to write something involving this incredible setting and premise" and came up with this.
It's not a huge departure from Undertale itself, the plot line is inspired by UT's but isn't identical. Not sure how it'll be received but I'll go ahead and share it.
If enough people like it, I guess I'll carry on with it. Otherwise it was just a little experiment that I did for fun.
*Reads title*
Buddy, I don't know if you know this but...
The title of your story is also the name of Undertale porn.
You've written this story into its own grave because of that title.
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I was not aware of that, I'll change it.
Though I think writing it 'into its own grave' is a bit of an exaggeration.
I call Luna being Asgore or something similar.
7309165 wait, what was the title?
7312081 undertail
7312591 wow, I can see how that's misleading.
7312594 Haha, it wasn't supposed to be, it was just a pun. I realised the connotations but didn't think it would be a serious problem until that guy told me about the NSFW fic.
7313347 anyhow, I really hope this gets noticed, the story I mean; it's actually pretty good.
7313355 Thanks. I'm not getting my hopes up though.
7314037 understandable, still I wish you luck.
This intro is very good and well written! I also think that you managed to write a great description! I love Undertale, so it's always great to see a story based on it.
7314037 Did you try submitting this to the HIE group?
7325366 Thanks.
Which group specifically? This isn't really a HiE story, it's Equestria in the human world inside the Undertale universe.
7325440 The HIE group has a category for pony on earth stories right here. You should submit it there! It would help you get more readers.
7325559 Oh, okay, I'll add it there, thanks.
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Too bad you abandoned it.