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This story is the Sequel to Shed.MOV
It's just after Rainbow Dash's funeral and Pinkie Pie has something she want's to say to her deceased friend, she never had the courage to say it to Rainbow's face personal and decides to say what she had been hiding all these years.
I decided I would be a bit 'sensitive' per say so I hope you enjoy this story and like always I appreciate Creative Criticism.
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This is better than the initial story. There are a few grammar type errors but what would really improve the story is that at the start it feels like the narrator is telling me everything rather than Pinkie showing it. At the end it gets better about that but I think you can do more of that at the start.
I do like the premise though of Pinkie missing Dash after her death and admitting her feelings for her. I can see that in her character. The reason for her death is a bit out there but for what it is I like the idea.
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thanks for the intel
Don't worry pinkie.....she'll be fine
7234217
most definitely
7234217 yeah twilight will resurrect her from the dead
7234282
I might just make a prequel considering that
7234295 sequel you mean, In that series this is based on twilight does resurrect dash but I haven't watched it in ages so I could be wrong
A hostile Zombiedash has been located in you AO
If any of you have any ideas for future stories I'll be glad to hear them
Nah Pinkie should be the one bringing Dash back to life if anybody. She would have to go on a quest to some mystical site which puts her love for Dash on the line over her sense of self preservation. Might have to work on a way of redeeming FLuttershy in there too to get the complete story experience.
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wow that's a really good idea I'll come up with some thing soon
7284244
umm..... Is that a bad thing, or......?