Not much to say here really. Hello? Fluttershy/Pinkie Pie tie for best pony.
A Storm is heading for Ponyville. It will destroy everything in its path. Heading up the evacuation, Rainbow Dash must get everypony out of the way before something terrible befalls her friends.
But now she is lost, along with a terrfied Ditzy Doo and an utterly broken Fluttershy. Dash must lead them home, and find for herself just what happened to their town, and the truth about the mysterious storm.
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Ohgeeze, don't let Twi die! Or any of the others...Gah!
Please write more~
767511 Might kill her, might not.
Definitely writing more
"Go down with the books?"
Well, presumably she has some plan at least to save them and isn't just being stubborn like Applejack. Maybe a force field?
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not saying 
spoilers
Dang your title, I thought it was firefly
768533 I couldn't resist it. Firefly's epic. :P
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Still that was very misleading, although i appreciate that people remember it
768577 well sowwy for the confusion.
They way you finished this chapter...
Makes me instantly want more.
You truly are a talented writer.
You don't have enough readers.
Seriously, this is amazing!
HOW DAREST THOU TEASETH ME WITH FIREFLY?
Seriously though, not cool to have a Firefly reference in the title and have it be completely unrelated to Firefly or Serenity. Though I am now tempted to try to make a Firefly x MLP crossover...
1066317 Really? Go ahead and make a crossover, because that sounds cool. But in all honesty, the title works with what im trying to do with this fic, the fact it came from Firefly was a nice addition.
A bit late to change the title now though.
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Alright, alright, I'll make the crossover, gorramn it. Now I've just gotta find the right premise to base this on....
1067962 Here's a concept idea for you: The Alliance were using essence of Pony to make the PAX. The crew stumbles across their harvesting operation on the mysterious planet Equestria... and so on and so forth.
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Well buck, that is actually a pretty good concept. Kinda like the Rainbow Factory, except instead of their color, it removes the power of their strongest virtue of harmony. Imagine the Alliance getting their hands on the Mane 6. Well buck, this is gonna be grimdark as fuck, but what the hell, it's too good of an idea to waste, right?
1071465 You write it, I'll read it. Have fun.
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The Pax
Got it started
1115814 ALL OF THE YAY
Have fun writing.
Oh, my. Her poor sense of direction and not knowing a heck of a lot are a bit of a problem. Good thing that help showed up when it did.
This hurt me a lot to read. Who would do such a thing to poor Flutty
I didn't comment on the first chapter so i missed out on saying this but i love what you did with the Doc. I was particularly tickled by the term "Scoltish" 
David Tennant is ultra-scottish and that's how i hear the Doc in my head haha I love this story and hopefully the next chapters aren't so mean to our dear Fluttershy. (found this story while finding Derpy/Ditsy stories so I'm really pleased you didn't put Derps into the bamboo. I probably would have cried haha)
1201532 Yeah, it hurt to write that bit with Fluttershy. But it had to be done for the sake of the story.
That and have some weird thing for doing in my favourite character of a story. But in this case mostly because it helps with themes.
Oooohhhh. This is going to mess RD up for years to come....assuming, of course, that there are years to come.
Do I wanna know why the ground is red?
1293207 here's a clue. You may have been correct about RD being a bit messed up. That may not have been a puddle she stepped in.
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Considering how this story seems to be going, no. You really don't. Then again, if you thought like that, you'd probably have run away around Chapter 2. So I suspect that you already know what happened.
Also: "going to"?
Your optimism amuses me.
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Oh, super. This means that Ditzy and Fluttershy have just ended up stuck with somepony infreakingsane.
Ah, well. Broken-up Ponyville, broken lives of whoever's left standing back home, might as well have a broken Rainbow Dash.
1297279 I know, not a pretty picture is it? But don't worry, with any luck this might have a happy ending.
Might.
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It might but it could go either way.....
1297344 I've got two endings planned. Whichever one I use depends on how depressed I am by the time I get around to using them. If I'm sad enough I'll write the happy one.
No that's not an excuse to heckle me to get a happy ending
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So we should expect the rocks-fall-everypony-dies thing then.
1298605 Nah. The story is planned all the way up to there. And the amount of death is the same in both endings. It's just the tone that changes and the actual actions and end state of the surviving characters at the end.
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So instead of whoever's left standing being broken utterly, they can somehow or other build on what they've learned. Gotcha.
Well, with her poor depth perception and questionable (at best) sense of direction, it's kind of no wonder that they've been going the wrong way. Funny. You'd have thought RD would have remembered that Ditzy is Mare Pretending to be Hibiki Ryouga.
1332808 I have no idea who Hibiki Ryouga is.
Although I recognise the name.
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One of the angrier idiots on Ranma 1/2 best known for being able to get hopelessly lost.
Well, I think I have an idea of what's talking to them: Equestria it/herself.
1374767 But they only just got back into Equestria (I'm using the map that was circling the internets a month or so back)
Ah. So some other entity is talking to them.
1375057 Spoilers my dear Candiru. But hold that thought.
It ain't hard to see which one either. This is because I do a real annoying thing called remembering stuff like "COPS: Equestria", "Equestrian Knights" and "Harbinger" wherein the author wants to remind his or her readers of how grave the situation is by travelling the following five-step path:
1) Kill
2) the
3) Un-nameable
4) Grey
5) Pegasus.
1464405 I haven't read any of those three.
And I have a plan for Ditzy, she's safe for the moment.
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Still, though, I ain't liking her chances of surviving this. It's usually the one with the most to lose that gets the ax in this sort of thing.
On edit:
Insert comment about living envying the dead here.
My bets are on Flutters
1915610 Nobody wants Dashie to cop it then? hmmm, interesting.
Well. I would like to see how it ends.
No I mean I don't really care if dash dies its just that Flutters has a slimmer chance at survival